PilinyTheYounger
welcome new stories yey! even though I am not a writer / author etc. at least I give my opinion based on reading experience .... A good story I say, although the world background and the development of the story and characters are still floating and unclear due to the lack of information that can be used to understand the story .. and yes good job on the story and i will support you man !!
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤Errmmm what should I even write. Everyone knows I'm bad at giving reviews.lolFirst of all, I love the story. Reading it made me remember all the good times I had there.?I learned a lot though. The gr8 Nixxie advised me and I couldn't be more grateful.❤I realized that all those big authors we see aren't rude and they're really nice people.Secondly, you must read it!!!! I mean why not. Don't you want to know what your fav. Author is like behind close doors???Lastly, A cute girl like me is in how can you not read huh???Lol. Don't forget to support the author tho??
Oh my gosh really a great story!!! Ahhh keep up with it. I don’t know why others are having issues with bl stories I enjoy them myself. I mean live is live such people are really weird lol but all are free to feel like they want. Still ur the author don’t let others control u. Nevertheless I am loving the novel and can’t wait for more. I so highly recommend this story to everyone!!!????
Es una buena novela pero el traductor es muy malo lastimaEs una buena novela pero el traductor es muy malo lastimaEs una buena novela pero el traductor es muy malo lastimaEs una buena novela pero el traductor es muy malo lastima
great story but in feelin betrayed alice whyyyy?! and a deas ex gf should stay dead and im pissed but i cant give a bad grade cuz of it sense the plot teists are suprising and entertaining even if i am infuriated by the betrayal of alice and the author who crushed my ship but i mean my mans has some bad taste in women, they all turned out to be traitors...
I can tell that this is not a simple story. The character is deep and every chapter is exciting. Looking forward to see the story development.
Came looking for the real VW: CCM only to find this... Sad to see that something like this is here on the new site I’m trying to learn how to use..
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This story was stolen from another website, where it was dropped a long time ago, don't expect any updates------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
There is no special characters in the novel, and any mistake, so in my opinion..The novel has a very good storyline and interesting mc with side characters it's a good novel
This book is very excellent if you can change your ride it I can't wait to read what else you decide to write the characters are wonderful and I just enjoy it so much I thank you Arthur for your time and your patience Sincerely your fan
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