Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
First of all the premise of the story is good but, the MC of this story doesn't use his brain at all. He acts and thinks like a child. Always daydreaming when someone is talking to him and even when multiple people warns him to be careful because of the dungeon's abnormality he just treats it as air lol. He just collects different kinds of skills and tries to hide it to avoid attention ( Pov: Uses multiple skills carelessly so people will know it. Nice try hiding it smh ).In other words if you have a lot of spare time you may try to read it to pass time, if not then good luck ??
has potential to become sensation .22 chapter that I finished reading were good let's see in future
it has great character setting and it has a nice world setting
Nice I love the story, especially sylphy and aquarina relationship both looks so cute and adorable together.
Badass story, I love it. Only wish that MC would care about his subordinate rather than being lucky when they need him the most and everyone in Shadow Garden should know who shadow's real identity is.
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The theme is obnoxiously captivating and attractive. It is pretty weird but good in a way. I was quite shocked while reading some chapters which is a green flag. Hoping for the best.
I really like this novel and I hope that it’s picked. The plot and overall storyline is very interesting and refreshing to read. The novel is taking an over played genre and making something new and I am interested in seeing where it would go.
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I am big fan of naruto all manga and all the tv show anime of naruto, boruto is also very good and the movies. I also love naruto fan novel, this is very good so far. please dont stop. its amazing now. Keep it up friend
Man really love the story, but just dnt make it in to another harem that goes of main topic. . .......