The characters are bland, mc kinda dumb, logic doesnt always hold up. I can’t really get immersed in this story, which makes it a bad read for me.
This is a pretty awesome story to be honest there is not a lot to it yet but it is growing pretty good and leaves me hungry for more. Author keep it up and I’m definitely a fan from now on
Orginal start to the story would have been great but author purposely causes the mc to have ridiculous cheats that make him so OP it ruins the story just so the MC can ***** and moan till he gets restarted into a weak ass demon bad guy. I honestly hate it I liked the start and felt it had promise but the MC had a terrible personality. The MC acts so righteous talking about how he is a writer and can't handle a no plot story using his setting yet the dude wrote one story with a little over 400 chapters. This feels like a glossy plot hole whole story is annoying. I respect that the author tried i really do but honest opinion I hate this story with a passion for making me like its main setting to just flush the story down the toilet wipe your ass with it and say welp let's do over.
I'm in chapter 130 something. At first it was a novelty being recluse with ability is fine and all. He treats the same sickness, say the same line every diagnosis (stop smoking and drinking stuff) its like the author don't know anymore sickness and diagnosis. His character is not consistent, and too much of a wimp. All that is bearable, but things are not really progressing so yeah. Even for a spice of life genres this world count filler full story is not normal for me.
From the few chapters, there are I can say this novel has a solid premise which has made the interactions between the mc and others very interesting. The only thing I have a gripe about is that his views are different from those around him with no explanation. This doesn't matter too much and it could be explored later. I'm excited to see where this goes.
Hi, this is Yorasu. I am the translator of this novel, Godly Model Creator.Some of you might have already known about this. From now on, GMC will be dual hosted both in Webnovel and Gravitytales.Hope fellow readers here enjoy this novel just as much as I do. :)
typical Chinese story, well if you don't count the protagonist's lack of pride and how he prefers to be the girl in the relationshipYou also have to unlock it from chapter 17not recommended, just a loss
Going quite well!
I purchased 10 chapters of this book and can’t even read them! I am so upset.
Okay so this chapter is basically the moment everything flips. Su Yiwei finally drops the bomb about Su Yirou not being the real daughter, and she does it in the most calculated way possible. She doesn't just expose her—she makes Su Yirou expose herself first, then plays the innocent victim while watching the whole family turn on her. That line where she says 'Second Brother, don't be impulsive' while flashing Su Yirou a provocative smile? Chilling. She's playing 4D chess while everyone else is playing checkers. And the best part—Su Yiwei doesn't even go for the kill shot. She explicitly thinks about playing cat and mouse because she knows her dad will find a way out for them. This is a woman who learned from her past life and is applying every lesson strategically. The plot structure here is brilliant because the author doesn't just give us a reveal—we get the aftermath, the family's reactions, and Su Yirou's internal screaming all in one scene. It's layered.
please more chapters