Six chapters in and can’t wait to see how the story develops. I’m excited to continue readying!
Interesting premise - wondering the direction that the story will go. I really enjoy reading the story. Great job author, just take care on some of your grammar mistakes.
The story is too much slow paced. Thing that should take on 3-4 chapters, author stretch them unnecessary to 15-20 chapters. Too much unnecessary information. Unnecessary stretching of information only makes reader frustrated.
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I just started reading it and it was great so far. good luck author ?????
yeah I am biased because it is my own book if I were to be honest I would give it a 3.5 but I am biased so 5
This novel seems pretty solid and enjoyable to me. It is a shame that the author has dropped or abandoned this a couple years ago. I found it interesting and wanted to read much more. I know that authors almost never return to stories they have set aside for this long so my only regret is that I will never know how the story turns out.
The story is rather promising but please before you continue writing your chapters overwork your former ones. Correct wrong written words and your gramma.There are on mass of free online tools who would help you improve the quality.
Stick to your country when writing novels, don't use a country you practically know nothing about except what you see in movies. China is not USA, don't use your Chinese perspective to generalise US except this I like the book
A repetitive, one-dimensional story centered around an MC who simps for a forced love interest. At every turn, everyone disdains the MC until he face slaps them with his ability. He then is ‘magnanimous’ by giving those he slapped benefits.I’m more than 200 chapters in and disappointment is all I can really say. It took a drastic turn ever since he started simping for the girl.Verdict: Trash
MC forgets to have a system after chapter 40-50.This suffices to drop the novel, I Ve ready till chapter 90 and its not worth..
Honestly you can kinda take this review with a grain of salt because there are so few chapters I cant say anything about stability of updates or world background really, but honestly i'm hooked. The writing quality is really good and so far the characters, irl world, game, and npcs and everything are rly good and well written. The author has also dropped foreshadowing and honestly my imagination is running wild and I can't wait to read more. With only 9 chapters I can't guarantee the novel is good but so far its promising and its 100% worth it to at least try reading it.