A good start. The MC was conflicted with his own feelings. What was left to him after the title? Decent writing from the author, not jumble-up words or unnecessarily long sentences and info dump. All the best author
Reading Status: C21Writing Quality 5/5Stability of Updates 5/5Story Development 4/5Character Design 4/5World Background 3/5The total score: 4.2The writing quality is pretty good, so even with an instant google translation, I can understand everything perfectly, although a little more detail would be appreciated sometimes, you know. It is worth mentioning that sometimes more dialogue makes the interaction more organic, but it depends on the context, where sometimes the descriptions can say much more than a character's point of view. The important thing is to virtually understand the sensations described (as a reader), which makes everything better to enjoy.The upload stability is consistent, I can not say more.I can infer the development of the story, but I still look forward to seeing how it will be dealt with Kingdombuilding, one of my favorite tags. Which relates to the world background, well, while it's understandable that the central point of the story is the concept of the MC's system, the world that the MC will experience is still green.The character design is what catches my attention, and I can say that the author is consistent with this. I can understand that at some point there are always generic characters, and not all of them can be reflected by words like "alive" or at least dynamic, but from what I can see, I won't be disappointed. The "important" characters in the story will not be empty per se.The concept of the story is what fundamentally attracted me to read. The synopsis reflects well what you will find if you read this, so I won't beat around the bush. If the potential I see is used in the right way, this can be very good. #NoNTROtherwise, good job.
I think I have read a story with similar plot to this before. Does someone know about that story? I can't particularly remember the name. The mc had to follow the mission which were same as these.If someone does know, please send me a message.
the concept is good and novel is amazing. yes there are a few grammatical errors but apart from that its amazingkeep up the good workall the best for your future
New translator? The previous translator is mistycloud ?. Same translator with a novel genius doctor black belly miss. I’ve been waiting to continue to read this novel so long.
I hope the translator will give mass release chapters, but 9 chapters????? I’ve read more hundreds chapters. Till when I can wait to continue to read the story?
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Everything is a mess, mc is already as strong as a lvl 7 at chapter 60 when the highest right now is lvl 9. Theres no plot, just generic evil guys who do evil things just because. World building is nonsensical. Mc exposes his baffling OPness to the government and nobody cares and chooses not to ask him about it, a lot of innuendos and murderhoboing. 2/10 novel because it was entertaining but its not a good story at all
I think is book is pretty great and interesting. Would like to see more chapters from the book :D. There are some mistakes in the work but nothing too huge.
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This story is great! Nice to see an MC being pushed into growth because he realises how weak he is from a near death experience rather than the cliched girl-dumping-boy or death of a family member. Plot is solid so far (ch.60) and I really want to see how the MCs growth continues on and the challenges he’ll face in the future, so,e of which has been alluded to already. Hope this gets picked up for continued tra elations!!