Genuinly such a joy to read. Super well worded. The characters are impossible not to love and are funny! The world is a mixture of Harry Potter and elements of Murim. The MC also doesn't just get an instant buff to become OP, but is granted a path towards it that requires hard work. The best part for me is how each character has a good deal of depth to them that slowly gets unveiled. Everything also feels so natural (with exception to the main advantage the MC has which is the premise of the book). Overall top notch book. Also, MC has??*this* personality, which I like.
Author Update - I have looked at my previous chapters until 40, and I gotta admit that some parts were slightly amateurish and badly written, but chapters from 40 start getting better, I promise. I have written quite a lot of drafts, up to 70 chapter already and it keeps increasing and a lot of interesting things are happening in the life of Ichiro, even I, as a writer I am honestly surprised of the things I wrote and I think most of you will enjoy it, so please read at least up to 50, because a lot of interesting things start happening after it, and if you still don't like the novel, then you should prob it because this novel isn't probably for your taste then. Thanks for readind and I hope you will enjoy.
Actually i am feeling annoying when reading this novel,the mc jump from first world to transmigrate world and fake world i am feel so annoying because i feel like the world is not properly describe
Its been a really long time since I felt that a book on WN was worth reviewing. This is one of those books you don't want to miss.Admittedly, the chapters need some editing and the grammar can be better. but having said that, the rest is BANG ON.This is one of the stories which have the potential to go for a good 1000 chapters or more. The world building is solid. The characters are a good blend of realistic, heroic and OP.The balance between the game world and IRL is well done. I am excited for the rest of this book.
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It’s actually the best signing in type novel I’ve seen so far…. Most of them are just stupid and way too op way too soon but this one is a bit more toned down at least . Waiting for it to get realesed .
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A new survival novel with its own spins. Very entertaining to read. I hope it is picked :) ...............................................
it a good story from what I have read till now the world building is great and in this story you see how the character of mc is built from birth, which to be honest helps you to relate to the mc this novel has a lot of potential maybe better than the outher's other novel ,but in the end it all depends on him, only one problem that update status is not that good but other than that a good read
very awesome im an scp fan myself and i love it. the book and the characters are great, also its very accurate i would love to see him fighting some famous scps.
Let’s go according to order, shall we?Writing Quality:- Excellent. The words flow smoothly and there are little grammatical mistakes. The author has real flair with actual substance not just simply filling word count and I can assure you that the style of writing is really immersive.Updating Stability:- This author does sometimes have irregular days where he doesn’t update but I don’t see the author improving it in anyway and I’m not really bothered by it. Story Development:- As usual with weak-to-strong stories, the beginning may seem slow but once you get into the action, it’s a done deal being well explained and never stale. I really love the smoothness of the pace as it seems to have been even more polished than his previous works.Character Design:- As written in the author’s review, the character’s decisions seem well thought out and relatable with some having a few screws loose. The MC is likeable and seems like a average guy. Although I can’t really go into detail as a lot of side character backgrounds aren’t revealed as of yet, I trust the author’s skills.World Background:- My favorite thing about this author is his intricate power system. That’s not to say it hasn’t been used before, it’s just that the author does it well. It’s woven delicately and he usually uses the debuff and buff system[One where one ability supplements another’s shortcomings]. The world background has not had much exposition as it dives into the Tower fast but I have high expectations. Summary:- The author does have his faults with irregular updates and imo slowing down the power upgrades by detailing the power system by too much. But, at the end of the day, this whole review is my opinion and I really like this book.
Good story , Nice starting and also detailed but not too much information which is quite good. Well I want to say that it's enjoying but don't use too much cliche like love interests are kidnapped and threatened for being r*ped which is only thing I don't like. It decrease interest in story and let readers worry about girls which too cliche and unacceptable for me. Well nice , keep it up