Yeh, i also read until 50 chapters. MC is a little slow and focusses on things which are not of much importance. Story seems to br a drag tbh.
After CH 59 the translation and grammar/speech went down
Didn’t think I would find you here either. Was looking for something to read. Read “Hail the King” if you haven’t yet.
I just wanna ask, is this Long Ye gonna die? Cause I f*cking hope she would die a horrible death and obliterated completely from the world.
wrong hole?
I love this story! In a nutshell it is about girl power, and honestly I got so motivated to pursue my dream even more after reading this novel. I know it is only a fiction and coincidences of meeting the right people at the right time is not something that can happen easily in reality. But MC's drive to improve herself, her living condition and her knowledge is just inspirational. I highly recommend this novel and hope to read more of this author's other novels in the future.
early review, ch. 47
critique first:
--infrequently, you may find a typo or slight grammar mistakes. part in parcel with enjoying webnovels
--sometimes the mc feels like she speaks more eloquently than the plot should allow, but not a major plot hole
why it's good:
--mc goes through some very major trauma starting at 10 years of age. none of it is s--ual, yet it's still possibly a trigger warning for parents or folks with rough childhoods. if you can get past some of the rough bits, you start to really get a sense of the psychological depth of the characters early on in the story. their healing and progress makes sense and feels real. overall, I it is a novel that I think shows a lot of potential to help someone who might be struggling.
--the main characters struggle is very unique, but is also entirely believable. not corners cut, no dice rolls (probably). everyone is clearly planned and well thought out.
--fast paced. there seems to be a system involved, but so far it feels more believable than some far-fetched soul-ai.
hope this helps gather some support. :) the world seems a better place for the story so far
Amazing novel
It's actually quite good, I'm enjoying the read, I just have a little problem, the description of the characters, especially the women or members of the harem, we don't know if they are tall, short, if they have big, modest or small breasts, yes they have curves, a huge butt, toned, heart shaped, eye color, absolutely none of that has been mentioned, we don't even know if Allaire has wolf ears or tail or anything like that.
I'm in chapter 15 btw, I hope and is changed that later, otherwise it would be a problem, if you can't describe them, then at least put a reference image in some auxiliary chapter
Waiting for the world building to get further, everything else is good. Pretty interesting book, really keeps me entertained when bored. Recommend for casual readers.
This ongoing WebNovel is quickly becoming one of my favorites. The author's world-building is so intricate and the characters are so complex that I'm constantly fascinated by their stories. The plot twists and turns are so unexpected that I never know what's going to happen next. I highly recommend this WebNovel to anyone who loves a good ongoing read!
No es por ser mala onda pero tu historia está más seca que el corazón de una mujer no muestras como se relacionan los personajes simplemente haces un pov y listo enamorada para toda la vida las interacciones tampoco me atrapan y la lectura no me atrae simplemente se interrumpe la imaginación qué creas en la cabeza para ser cincero le falta mucho pero esto no es para desanimarte es para que crezcas y puedas ser un mejor autor