This is a terrible translation. I gave up on the story because of this. it regularly has chapters telling different versions of the same part of the story, immediately after each other. (for example version one the master is looking for a new disciple, sees a promising recruit, and the rest of the chapter tells of the recruitment. But the next chapter is version two so suddenly the would be disciple has come to the sect to apply for membership, and the master notices this promising disciple for the first time and the chapter ends with the recruitment, only for the next chapter to be version three of this scenario of the master recruiting the disciple.) I dragged myself through two loops like this, and I just can't go through it again. It's frustrating because I think the actual original story is really good so if the issues were fixed, or if a whole new translation was added to the site, I would definitely give it another shot.
unreadable with mc's personality.(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ(?・・)σ( ･ω･)☞
This novel started quite interesting, but then just became a mess. Everything is handed to the MC, he has a cheat that makes him have perfect cultivation potential, he has a cheat that makes him master any martial art. At least in other Wuxia the MC trains like crazy, but this guy just has sex with anything with legs. I understand that this novel has R18 in the tags, but there are many with that say tag that have a well told story to go along with the Smut. This is not one of them.
fantastic storyline, I also haven't laughed so much while reading for awhile. "Truly, no one is as arrogant as him." ?
First it should have "harem" as a tag cause you could guess it from the beginning. There's a lot of inconsistencies in the story and I think it's a major turn off.
There isn’t a single thing unique about this book. Typical MC face slapping everyone and everything, x-girlfriend who abandoned him for antagonist, every single woman introduced being a world toppling beauty, and the typical Fat best friend did the MC. Not to mention the fact that it seems that the furor or translator was having a field day nd just pressing enter 1o times for every small sentence. it is such. A shame that Webnovel has such ow quality books. Worst part about it is the fact the book is most likely going to go premium, meaning we’re spending our had earned stones on some piece of trash book 9even tough most of the books on here are trash anyway)
I hope this novel is like quick transmiggration cannon fodder counterattack where mc is hardworking, she don't give **** about male lead and romance. she work hard to change fate of this canon fodder and help their future bright.
Giving the first review as the shameless author of this novel. The story is like practice match for me. I will do many experiments in this story to get the feedback of the readers. So please kindly guide me and help me improve the writing quality, character design and story development in a way that can help me in the future.And please don't ignore my mistakes and also don't curse me or be angry when reading this novel.I will be making thousands of mistakes and I expect thousands of advice too. Please guide me.
More please.
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Creative imagination is excellent. The way the author vividly writes Qai' s learning and the places he travels is fabulous. It triggers my imagination also. Thank you for sharing a wonderful story...
the pilot is good and it's promising story. will look forward to more of the story. The opening was different considering some. i think the story will have good oncoming chapters