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I love this book. because there is no harem or anything, it’s more about the actual story. and it has a great concept.
"Isn't that a little bit unfair for the other members who don't specialize in offensive attacks and spells?" Elou asked.
as long as i read, it is one of the most interest and logical novel about skills
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Hi there! Just here to give you some reviews :) Hope you don't take my review negatively if ever it creates an impact on you.To be honest, I like how you go through with your narration, its like written by an experienced writer (are you?). There are some minor issues with your grammar like in your first chapter,'A shrill insane voice screams from quite a distance away, but the horrifying effect of the voice does nothing to the hundred or so other poorly-dressed figures around him. 'the part ' A shrill insane voice screams...' you could just modify it a bit like, 'Insane-like shrills and screams..' to me it sounds really disturbing because you are putting too much adjectives just to describe, keeping it ****** and short is needed sometimes.'but the horrifying effect of the voice does nothing to the hundred or so other poorly-dressed figures around him.' ill try to edit this part because I cannot explain on what to do on this part.'but the voice that emitted a horrifying effect doesn't affect a hundred (or so) poorly-dressed figures surrounding him.'This is the only thing I could give as an example..I hope you wont take this as an offensive review :)P.S I love the idea you put in your story...
Good work author! I must admit that I am not that familiar with the genre but I am still hooked. Which is why I think it's good! The 'info dumping' as they termed it actually helped me understand what was happening. I am rooting for Theo and I like that he's humble, eager but determined. I am rooting for them all! Quite intrigued with Duunim too. HAHA. I'll definitely read everytime you update!
The plot, it's so gooooooood.The situations and approach are so realistic, I'm dying to read chapter 3 now. Btw I loved the way you introduced Xander, Yena and Zico.
Plenty of good ideas but idk why you decided to suddenly add 10 different cliches in 5chapters. The whole birthday party and pirate part is full of absurd situations brought by stupid decisions and extremely unlikely scenarios. Suspension of disbelief can only take us so far.The main problem is how scatered everything is. The MC is juggling twenty different things at the same time, both women and classes.I know I wrote more about the problems than the qualities but both the power and the world itself is pretty cool and interesting. Idk if the arena thing is common but it’s the first time I’m seeing it and it’s creative.
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I love this! A shame the updates are so far apart, but this is something different from all of the cookie cutter systems on this site. I highly recommend it to anyone who dislikes the slow pace of a Chinese Webnovel.
I haven't managed to read a lot of the chapters, but based on what I've read so far, the story is quite intriguing. The progression is not too rushed, but it's not too slow either. Every chapter was written with care. Keep up the good work, author.