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Im cant give a proper rating cuz I gave up reading after the first 10 chapters... but I did not like the MC at all... he was simply annoying, while I waited to know what's actually happening in the story... maybe I'll read a bit later on... let's see (I'll update the rating then)
3 new Books and 36 chap locked ? Nice..........................................................................................................
An amazing book. The concept of getting his powers and having to fulfill something other than just randomly exploring is also a good thing because it gives mc something to work up to.?
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i even gave 5 stars for writing quality ....so just ....plz...CONTINUE WRITING THIS.........................................................
I was so damned concern on reading each word trying to explain what was happening to tie zhu that i cannot fully comprehend and ubderstand as to what extent it would lead to.. Haist... I feel quite dis oriented at the moment...
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One of the better original game novels here. Mc gets 2nd chance in life as he takes over jung man from modern world that has virtual reality games. As he had hectic assain life his last life in fantasy like world he now wants more normal life. So he starts his virtual reality game where he is op because its similar to his last life.Now the good part is that this novel has some original ideas and not very big plot holes as of now. Also its mc friends character designs are not bad. As latelly I have droped novels as I could not stomach mc friends (who are so anoying that no sane man would take them as friends).There are still 2 things that are bit anoying: 1. Mc goes with the flow too easily even if he only wants to be crafter, 2. Now mc who should be clueless about games often seems smarter about games than profecional famers who he interacts.So lets wait and sea how tgis novel develops. It could end up one of the better game novels or flop no idea right now.Author please add cover to the novel. Even simple white page with novel name and authors name is ok.