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First of all, I would like to congrat the author for all the update and the writing quality. There isn't too much repeating and the reading is fluid.However I must say that I found the character design of All the characters without any exception absolutely tasteless , you can say that I'm quite harsh but it's the truth, there is no surprise or depth in any character.Then I find that this story is quite quick because I think the "Cultivation " system is extremely simple and make you wonder why all the world is at tier 4 or more, because it's extremely quick to advance and the fight don't seem difficult, you don't feel any struggle from the protagonist .Then I think come the weakest spot of this novel, the World background. I feel everything in the World revolve around the MC that, without him the rest of the World would be boring, we know 2 of the 5 great families from the start and they don't seem important at all, and the rest is blur.The problem is that you can't enter in the World of the author because nothing is explained, you feel left out.Those are the major lines of my criticism, if you read, you might feel them, omnipresent, behind what is described.That's why I don't feel confortable when reading this novel.There is room for improvement and potential. Now we only need the author to exploit this potential.
Hello author here , am writing this novel during free time , if your wondering why I am going fast pace is because I like making my characters op , plus no harem , no cheating in relationship stuff like that, I really dislike cheating relationship, and thanks for reading if your reading my novel! God bless you all!!
?????? when will the translator's break end? I've been waiting for over a year now for this to be continued and still no news about it, please continue translating it. such an interesting novel with fresh idea.
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I like the plot of the story. It depicts the life of modern young professionals. Let's see the development of the story on the next chapters. ?
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This story was fun to read there was some bad grammar but other than that I liked it
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My honest review, you have a very good style, especially for the dialogues, they are fluid and believable (more than mine I'm afraid), good grammar and the general style is easy to read, pleasant, without long paragraphs or unnecessary descriptions.However, in the development of the story there is a lack of bait to hook the reader. Beyond the introduction of the character, the first chapters have the reader a little lost as to where the story is going.Likewise, since they are well written, I recommend that you make a prologue with the important moment or the twist that keeps the reader's attention.
????????????lovely. Absolutely and definitely worth the read???????????. The characters, writing, all, too perfection.?I look forward to more from you. ?lots of love.
starting to get good hope theres more chapters soon ....................................................................................…...………...