Love love love this book nice
No matter how flawed and dumb he is to be a paragon he must've been pretty old right since his current progress is due to literal hax. Not only that but with age comes maturity so add 17 years to that. He's still way too dumb and immature considering the facts. Shouldn't have made him a reincarnated to begin with, the novel isn't horribly had but it lacks a certain umph. Unlike other major novels I feel no weight at all to his breakthroughs and the cultivation realms. Dropping this after all. At most he's merely a character that acts his physical age for once instead of a 12 year old with mental issues like the other cliches reincarnated mcs. The problems just keep piling up after a point. There's no excitement either. I found myself skipping and speed reading chapters as they were too boring or just simply couldn't hook me at all. Kind of interesting premise but it was poorly executed.
When I started reading I was a little bored to be honest, but after reading the begging I was very excited to read the next chapter after I finished the previous one. And there's so much unexpected developments (at least for me) that it keeps me reading and waiting for more. But when you switch between characters and don't say who's point of view is that it keeps me pretty confused. Thank you very much, Kami_Ada~ <3
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Come and judge me those authors who have not given themselves 5 stars, with that challenge issued; I would like to say that I really enjoy writing this novel so I hope that many people enjoy reading it.I am a novice writer so there are still things to improve, any comments will be appreciated.
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I red Rebirth of the Thief who roamed the world and realy liked it. Afterwards I tried finding other MMORPG novels with a similar style and found Plenty. My opion always shifts from liking them, to mildly anoyed, to regret.
This one though is a blast and so far better than Rebirth of the Thief.
Surw it has the one core issue this type of novel always has. That the author has to somehow keep the others relevant, but it is handled in a way that is not that grating to me and doesn't affect the novel negativly outside of some logic issues.
Tldr. This is absolutly awsome and probably the best novel of this type I have red.
The paragraphs are too large and blocky especially in the first few chapters. Other than the spacing everything else was ok, enough to pass the time.
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Plot seems very interesting and the novel has the potential to get really big as the author is not only amazing at writing but somehow is also great at writing in a way that makes reading the novel more fun... like its hard to explain so I think you should read take a read as well!
I don't know what's going on here. Maybe I missed something cuz things got supernatural and everyone just takes it like "meh". It gave me a feeling that it was a supernatural world and superpowers are no secret. Unpolished writing and tons of plot holes around. Things seems to be too rushed and characters have no emotions either.
Well interesting story overall good/amazing job to the author.
Warning it's mostly a open relationship so not for everyone I personally don't like it too much.
Especially in one of the last chapters where we learn that Nora see other guys. That truly puts me off I was mostly okay with the few who where clearly open (mira/tsuru..) but that was quite bad (I talk only due to my preference, that completely make sens in the story)
I have a little question for the author will the Mc be able to truly form his harem, close the open relationship Nora for exemple (even if there his some Yuri Tha persist ex Mira tsuru). That would help me decide if I continue due to me hating ntr (I know it's not but too close for me)