I’m not one to review these fics but considering the quality and outright falsehoods of some of these so called ‘reviews’ I find it necessary to give a more reasonable opinion. Without going into detail this is a good Chinese novel, better than most and as entertaining as anything on here. This is my favorite, currently updating, Chinese novel and I couldn’t name another, updating or complete, Chinese novel I like more than it.
I can handle normal poor english but this is almost at the level of an MTL. The author clearly is uninterested in establishing his characters or his world as he skips over major events (discovering the MC time travels he is over it and knows exactly what to do instantly, the CEO of a company gives a random stranger an 11million dollar gaming machine for no discernable reason, and so on). If the author learns to use an editor and slows down enough try to tell a story with even slightly realistic characters this might be great. Not willing to waste more time than I already have to see if they ever do though.
I'm so shocked, I was wondering why the writer didn't publish the chapters in Lucas' novel, but in fact he was stupid enough to write a second novel! And a harem novel! Such a thing would only be done by a fool who wants to increase his reading! I can accept that professional writers will write two novels at once, the writer of the descent of dimensions is a good example of that, his level is very good, the plots of the story are excellent, he has great ideas, he is a professional and that is why it is okay to divide his focus on two works.... but the writer of a survival novel The add-on is just a hobbyist! He did something very stupid, if he had focused more on his first novels it would have been better, I'm sure he was arrogant after he got some credit, but he has already crossed the line.... Personally, I am very critical of what he did.
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Chapters r too short. Had it been written by Mrdojo(writer of the original webnovels 'The 7 Realms' and 'The Necromancer system') this novel would have been finished within 80-85 chapters.
Also the grammar isn't that appealing.
And for those ppl who keep saying - 'Thos novel is trash. I dropped it after 3/4 chapters.' well, that's your fault. Most novels start their stories after a few chapters. This is one of them. It's not the best novel but certainly not the worst either (if we not bother too much abt grammar which is the problem with most webnovels on this site
its a good read its interesting and funny wish there were updates
I actually enjoyed this story though it was short and I’m looking forward to what else the author will make in the future. Even though I won’t tell other people that they should read it, I did have fun and could see myself in Xavier’s place which is awesome.
eu amo esse estilo de novel.
give more more pls god-
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god- 140 charcters god=dog=gold=lob=cook
I will be completely honest I did expect a lot when I started to read the first 10 chapters I thought he was just gonna be an op me especially after seeing his special skill but after seeing all of the rest normally I don’t like drama I think it unnecessar In a novel but reading this he nailed it sure the writing quality could use a little bit of work maybe add a bit more words per chapter and it feels like you are rushing which if you feel like you are under pressure in writing and finishing the chapter I strongly suggest take a break or slowing down to 1 chapter per week
It is a good novel to read and has some flaws but the author is obviously trying his best, so we all must try our best to help him succeed. if you are looking for a novel to read this is it don't disregard it as the potential is infinite.
As tradition, this is the 5 star review of my own story.
I had this story in mind from a while and I started to write it, I have already made a plan from this story and have already written some chapters of this story. Hope at least some of you will like it.
Good reading.
I don't like yuri that much nd in his harem there is harem stealing girl so it's pretty let down nd talk about how high his pride is that he consider others beneath him so he have to feel responsible is grossing me out it feels like double standard person while other things in story is very much appreciated