I really liked your fanfiction, please continue it, apparently there will be other alien races so will only original alien races appear or will alien races from other universes appear like thanagarians, skrulls, viltrumites, etc?
It has the most interesting synopsis I have ever read
If I put it in a simple way, this story will catch your heart and make you addicted... So read at your own risk ?I request you to give us more chapters ?
This Book is just digusting !
I don't have any other words to discribe it .
The idea is intriguing and interessting but the content disgusts me!
This Book is on Hiatus for 4 months now and I hope it stays that way.
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I am so engross in this is an extraordinary work of creativity.. It draws one in and gets one trapped.. I am trapped. I can't wait to see how Ken will end with his dual nature ànd the author has done well to lay good background to raise the curiosity of any beta reader.
I love this...
Kudos to this amazing author.
Most of the other low star reviews got it right. This novel is not worth reading.
Why, because the author has no understanding of the human condition and he does not even try.
Immagine spending a year doing the same thing all over again, then 10 years, then 100 years. This is about the maximum a human can life.
There is only one thing someone who has left such a time loop would do and that is waste away. The human mind will break and disassociate with the body.
Because the author does not address those issues we can only conclude that this is a novel by a bad author who only writes to finish his daily word count.
Sanity is by definition hard to grasp but after 100 lifetimes in a void without consequences there is literally no way for a mind to grasp the concept any longer. Humans are not machines, therefore we learn from our environment.
This is actually one of the rare few novels who could get away with a type of racism, because if you had experienced negative emotions every time you looked at an asshole who happens to be a foreigner for 10 years you would automatically associate every other foreigners of similar appearance with negative emotions. You would be conditioned to behave that way.
But even this gets the novel wrong.
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This novel is quite good and I really like it. The only problem is that the chapters are quite short but over than that it's a great story. So chapter please please please please please please please please please please please please
Really great read! Read up till chapter 60 and looking forward to reading more. No racism first of all. Second of all, protagonist is very intelligent and practical. He knows his limits and adapts perfectly to the prehistoric world while using his knowledge of the modern world to it's limits.
The storyvis amazingly interesting and progressive. The writer really has an outstanding writting ability abd illustrating things, situations, and personalities.
Waiting for the next chapter.
This is amazing you did a really good job setting this up I like the storyline and the way you portrayed the story was really cool and I think it helped get the feel you wanted