The novel itself piqued my attention to read more because it was written rather effectively. The general point of view was the one thing that did slightly perplex me. Why does that matter? However, aside from that, it was a good novel; keep up the good job.
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Great novel so far! There is a lot of story to still be developed but from everything I've read so far this is a must read for anyone that enjoys action romance novels.
i absolutley love how it's made and the charachters and stuff. I wanna know what happens to Mary , Cam , Renna and Johanna . Also, what happens to her friends? like, marry's friends.
Based on evolution! Try it I am sure this book will not disappoint you.If you are still dissatisfied with it, Give me a review on the shortcoming.English is not my native language, I use Grammarly for correction.If you find any grammar mistakes. comment on that paragraph.
I love stories like this. I love transhumanism and futurism and this story gives a lot of it. The characters are fairly good, if sometimes inconsistent. The story itself was very promising in the beginning, but lately I’ve been feeling that the author has been nerfing and intentionally retarding the story for the sake of aimlessly running around in circles with redundant storylines...hell sometimes I fell that Dax is becoming a secondary character at this rate. Also I feel conflicted with the cover art, I always imagined Dax as more...’inhuman’, I don’t hate it, but my Dax was always somewhat of a blend of a Turian from Mass Effect and a Human-ish figures - kinda like a fleshier turian, with digitigrade legs and all. Also the Empire seems to be using very technologically disparate equipment, they posses nanotech that’s on the level of flipping magic and can’t get widespread DEWs and relativistic KKVs up and running by using that nanotech.
plssssssss start translating soul of negary again, I love this novel. plssssss, I'm begging
This is really good and well written. This gives the same vibes as the original and the MC is similar to Fang Yuan but still has his own uniqueness. I really like the fact that he has better luck than Fang Yuan who had to go against the world which is typical for eastern fics. Over all I enjoyed this and hope you keep it up.
looking forward to this one.cjisisneiedndkdjsnsiejdndkdodjdjdjsjsjsjdjdjwjwnwi0q0qowjfvnkckfieu2msocufjriwidjrj2iiwjfjrjeisjfji2iejdkddd
Baked Potato RecipePreheat the oven to 300°F (150°C). Scrub the potato, and pierce the skin several times with a knife or fork. Rub the skin with olive oil, then with salt. Place the potato in the preheated oven, and bake for 90 minutes, or until slightly soft and golden brown. Slice the potato down the center, and serve with butter and black pepper. Sprinkle shredded Cheddar cheese over the top, if desired.I haven’t really read this novel, but I’ve seen it at front page and felt pity as it has more than 50 chapters already and only 2 reviews as of now. So, here it is. Good luck author, keep up your hard work! Don’t lose hope, hold on, persevere, keep going at it! Actually, I may even try reading this novel after all.
Honestly it looks but first we should get those ones before picked up as well. It's hard to enjoy novels like these or even read them because most of them don't get picked...
The idea of this novel is very unique and the plot is unlike anything I've ever read before. The synopsis also made me feel curious. Overall, I believe there needs to be an improvement in your writing but you have great potential. Keep writing!