Although this is an incomplete novel as of yet, I quite like it. It's unique to its genre and just overall is a good stoty. Also, love the consistant uploads author-san! I hope this novel becomes a sucess. Appreciate your work <3
I really enjoy this author. I feel like the story is very interesting. There’s enough mystery behind the world to make you fall in love and stay interested. I feel like all the characters have interesting qualties. Also the writing quality is really good. Rarely would there be a grammar issue. I recommend picking this novel up
The premise is promising and a bit rushed. Our MC transmigrated into one of his gaming characters. The plot is quick paced and is a gatcha/ summoning system. It's not for me, but give it a try.
a new premise/idea to me and it's very interesting, I'm not too picky but I don't find any major flaws and say this could be the rising of an amazing novel
Mc has a system yes and the reason for the 'video game' tag is because apparently the author views the MC's life as a video game due the system.(Weird but okay)I have read 9 chapters but I wanted to share my opinion, so the world background I really can't tell anything but from what I read is that mc resides in a fantasy world with goblins and a burning boar?Also mc is a grasshopper that lost his memories from his past life and only can remember general knowledge. The higher level he is the more he will recall from his previous life.Story development is your usual level up and become stronger. Currently the mc is just surviving as a tiny grasshopper.Character design is a bit weird in my opinion. The way the story is told looks like the mc forgot everything, but he isn't. So you get sort of a vague feeling... It's not really in the way of your reading experience so dont worry.SoU: 5* - as alwaysTranslation Quality: 4.5 stars. There are minor instances of wrong names placed or commas. But I only saw 2 - 3 in 9 chapters and is barely noticeable.All in all, give it a try. I will first read 39 chapters before I go to my next novel!
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I love this story! It is like a typical Xianxia, but with a few twists to make it more enjoyable for a western audience. It has far less filler, with chapter 82 correlating to around chapter 400 in a typical Xianxia, and the world seems relatively well thought out, it is clear that there are more details about the world that aren't being told to avoid an overly large info dump, but it doesn't feel like the Author ever pulls things out of his ass. There are a few downsides typical to web novels, the grammar is pretty good but not professional quality by any means, and the characters aren't really well fleshed out (still better than a typical web novel).Ultimately I would recommend this story to anyone who likes Xianxia stories, as it feels like a well-executed no-fluff Xianxia with a western twist.
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I do not like the description of the novel, it looks like all the other cliches that there are here by amount.I do not like the description of the novel, it looks like all the other cliches that there are here by amount.
great story but would have been great if it is available in other platforms. Im broke so i cant really buy the locked chapters so i will just have drop it. Loved the story though
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