Dayum this is good... at least till now. Of all the new novels this one is the cream of the crop. The translation is good for now as there are little grammatical errors. The world background is still in the build. The character design is not too overused and the focal is less on the main character which is, truthfully quite a fresh read. No nonsensical unreasonable system. No overused "Oh I think this cultivation technique is the most suitable for me" type of story. The main character made up technique is a mishmash of various cultivation chants and made up nonsense ?
a fun novel to read and the grammar are good and each arc is amazing ?
The chapters miss the flow between them and there's no proper development of plot. the cartel seems to change from beginning ch 1 to ch 30 in a large manner (also same with the personality of mc after only five days).
This story is absolutely amazing and probably my favourite on this app. Almost everything about it is perfect and I read all of the available chapters so fast.Huge well done to the author for making this :D
Well I already read the MTL, but still it's better to read the translate. Well the novel is good, I know this is spoiler so there will be Yuri in this novel, but they do it in front MC, So there will be no betrayal.
ch 269, bro you gotta be kidding me right, all that planning and you just throw it away?? Bruuhhhhhh, srry not my cup of tea, when you see mc getting abused for litteray no reason, why did he not call over fredric when he cleary had time and knew what would happen just naahhh.
The story so far is great the only thing that is upsetting is that there aren’t more chapters then there allready are. I really enjoy the story and How it is written so far. I hope The author keeps updating it. also its nice to see a story with league of legends in it as there are Way fewer storys with it than one would expect. So to sum this up keep up the good work.
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It pretty average.It started off interesting and funny but later on it started to get boring and generic.Story also started to divert from the main theme of the novel which is making wine.
This is a slow starting novel where author likes to introduce you to the world similar to novels like Record of a Mortal's Journey to immortality. As such, if you're looking for a standard fast paced typical xuanhuan then this is not it.That being said, this is a CRAFTING novel, more specifically a blacksmith crafting novel. MC gains a system where he can easily upgrade his smithed items with attributes. However, he doesn't abuse the system and instead learns how to craft without the system whilst learning many new blacksmith techniques e.g. Adding gems slots, making set items etc. The whole crafting process is very in depth and highly satisfying for crafting fanatics. A little similar to Upgrade Specialist in Another World, this novel although a Xuanhuan, has a more classical Xianxia setting and the crafting system is more fleshed out.The downside so far is its pretty crafting intense (approx 50%) so novel can feel VERY SLOW. The author has introduced a few different blacksmith type arcs (tests, new items) but there's very little drama or excitement which can make the novel a bit dull.The cultivation side is a bit more standard, he gets a "devouring" attribute which he puts on weapons to help him grow faster.Romance starts after a few hundred chapters and then stops for a long while - generally there isn't much.The MC is very cautious and calm, similar to Han Li (RMJI) and is very mature for his age (15). The cultivation progress is slow (in terms of chapters) but fast in terms of age. However, the balance isn't as good as RMJI because levels are split into 5 (which is too many) and so to keep the pacing the author has the MC 'skip' many levels at a time and he can constantly jump 1-2 large boundaries to fight. As such you can't feel the impact of a specific level. This is all confounded by the author not having a clear power structure that you don't really know how strong MC is (he was very strong in first few hundred chapters but because crafting chapters occupy bulk of novel it's unclear how strong MC is later on).The translation quality is great with very few grammar errors while the updates are regular.If you're looking for a more in depth blacksmith novel with an emphasis on crafting then give this novel a read. Translation should be done in 18 months at current rate.I dropped a star from initial 5 star to 4 star as although the crafting is great, author has got the balance wrong (too much crafting and not enough cultivation, drama, fighting etc) so novel can feel dry and difficult to continue reading at times.Update: I've currently taken a break from this novel with <300 chapters to go. One big gripe is he spends half the novel at the same cultivation boundary - because author writes long slow paced crafting arcs and then adds even more crafting e.g. Alchemy and formations, the cultivation time has to take a back seat. These newer crafts feel rushed as he quickly gets to the same level as his blacksmithing without the hard graft we've seen before so it all feels a bit cheap. The kicker is, after waiting for so long for him to gain the next cultivation level he starts getting fast power ups again. It all feels like lazy writing and you wonder why author didn't have a better pacing to the novel.It's not a bad read but if you're reading this as just a xuanhuan then the cultivation side is very dry and slow that I'd probably skip the novel. Read only if you really like crafting and don't mind slower, longer chapters.
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