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A good thriller, every chapter takes the story to the next level. Story building is on point. The book is written on facts, which is nice to come by.
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.....This novel already has 2 million votes when are you gonna release it?? are we supposed to wait until it reach 10 million or something??
So just pick this book. A great premise. Really want to know how the MC gets through his early predicament! So far the pace is good but a little frust at times!rating
The translator is a little lazy and the editor (if there is one) isn't pointing out the inconsistencies. A porcupine as a boar and even is called a boar at one point but is often called a porcupine... Lots of little things like that.The author doesn't seem to know what their doing at the start and just kind of dumps stuff on us without any clear goal. Gets better though as the author seems to figure out what their trying to do. By chapter 20 the story is mostly readable and is fairly enjoyable. I question the direction of the story and suspect many undesirable choices will be made in the stories development... but unless I see that I'm hopeful that it'll turn out to be a decent story though with WebNovel's track record that hope is questionable.
The story has a lot of potential and generates great momentum and urgency in the early chapters causing you to really get into it.The problem is the author interrupts that for what is essentially a side quest. Breaking all sense of urgency and emersion from it. Its like someone is running in the Olympics is about to get gold and then hits the breaks to check his phone real quick, only for everyone to gain on him and surpass him.To me breaking that momentum cost the story a large part of its appeal, resulting in a less extravagant rating.The worst thing is that I get the how and why the author did it. Even if it would not have gotten past an editor and instead would have been moved to the day after the mass grinding race before betas end...Certainly the info dump on items that would later exist in the real life game but did not exist yet and the shorter chapters really didn't help things.Thus my recommendation is this: Read the story if you're alright with such mistakes every now and then and simply enjoy a good concept more than the pacing and timing of stories over all.For a novel on webnovel, this has a great concept and nice story, if it sees a worthy editor as a completed story, I have no doubt it would sell as a stand alone ebook.
Honestly This is a really good story with Great characters and even better World building.I think everyone will really get a kick out of the 1st 3 chapters and the "false Start" where it set the MC up to be some OP person that he transmigrated into but it turns out he beat down by "the bad guys" near instantly but the "bad guys" are just super powered police and his thrown into Magic Super Max Jail.
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Another trash.Mc is a lazy a** bum which is very triggering to read.I don't recommend read this. It will make your head hurt while reading it.Plus the amount of inconsistencies is intolerable.
I have Read it Till chapter 160 or so , its like World online but more stupid. The Story is Shallow and You dont explained **** at all. The mc is Building a kingdom with 16532476 People but this peons are totally useless since the Main chars are freaking overpowered and can anyhilate averything themself, so why Even Build a kingdom ? The fights of mc Takes 6-7 chapter with 10 Million power ups , sayajins are scrap against that !!!!! There is like no Strategie Required at all its just a Face of betwen 2 People , the is just no Need for a Army !