This book is very refreshing. It isn’t your typical overused story type with the same repetitive characters that you read in way too many books.The background is well-thought, the characters are likeable, but they also have their edges, which is part of their charm for me.The best part for me is that the book/the author hasn’t reached his full potential and you can see the grow throughout the chapters.I have to belittle that the chapters are a little messy in the start, and there are a few spelling mistakes.The first one improves a lot and the second one isn’t that obstructive.All in all, please give this book a chance!!! I think it is really worth the time
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I like this, It was a very Noice Story.............................................................................................................................................
first of all you seams new writer. it’s ok keep writing you will Learn more. about story development It's like other Chinese cultivation novel but you add some extra about haven that other novel don’t say. you didn’t say much about main character design how he looks now. update is main factor keep it up update Daily. Don't make world like main character go from one realm to another It's boring. make something different. keep learning and keep this novel as long as you write You'll Learn. your idea is so keep it up.
Interesting and really draws you to it. It makes you want to continue and read more because if this I've continued to read this during my spare time at home
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The Book is consistent enough in grammar,(If you wouldn't take note about English depth) The pacing is great, The MC is quite humorous. The only thing I don't like is I find this book early where no little chapters just yet for now. So! BLUE BALLS!!