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This novel is mediocre. The first 30 pages seem more a slice of life than anything else. I keep waiting for the pace to inctease and it never does.
In my opinion, the cover and the title are a little bit plain and the prologue is too short and didn't hook me quite much. I saw similar things like this before, about the adventure from the weak being to the god-like being or stuff. I read five chapters, I could say the writing style is quite nice, the character Rufus is really great. The plot and the setting of the world are quite decent.
Keep up writing, author. You did great so far.
This work is so extremely derivative that it physically hurts me to read it. The entirety of the novel's setup and plot points are regurgitated from other sign-in novels. The only deviation from the standard is that the system has literally no characteristics beyond powering the main character up without effort; not even some token restrictions like location. The author had to go so far to make a unique system of cultivation that it isn't even coherent anymore. Substitute clan descendant for merchant descendant, branch house for monastery janitorial department, and cousin for token useless but sympathetic relative, and you've read the novel.
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Great read with great potential to be a good story, looking forward to more chapters from the author and I hope they keep it up.
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I've read this, which is the authors first novel. This can be said as the start of the trilogy/series which the sword of dawnbreaker is the 3rd.
This novel is something you should read after you turn off most of your brain's functions.It's a mix match of different clichés.Even after this it still manages to steal the plots of other works even blatantly stealing main characters ( only one so far).I say that from a practical view but otherwise most who enjoy the following will enjoy it: Young master face slappingCute ChildrenDoting on ChildrenOp mcModern cultivationFast accumulation of wealthAnd almost any other Xanxia trope
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