Stealing spree
Store system gods
Please ward off pain from I'm not the Demon king's Lackey
THE BEST!
This story has been in my library for ages and I just decided to read this story and I saw that the updates are scarce
great novel. Amazing op mc. If you like op mc you would like it.
100% garbage .. save brain cells and stay faaar a way
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Aren't we all here because of the drama? got hooked and craved for more? 'cause that's the case for me.After watching the drama, you'll get hooked and can't help but to need more so you'll watch the donghua, read the manhua and novel lol but doing so helped a lot in satisfying the thirst for more MDZS crumbs. You'll feel like the void inside you after watching the drama is filled, infact it overflowed. That's how great this MXTX's masterpiece is. The details in the drama, novel, manhua, and even the donghua are unmatched. The characters are so well written that even though what they did is loath-worthy, you can't help but to sympathize when you knew where they are coming from. You can tell that the plot, characters, and visualization are carefully thought of.
Yeah this is getting ridiculous this novel throws out the basic common sense. A 8 year old kid can be held legally liable for a mortgage? Then there is child labour law but system mission is open a restaurant. How? At least the author made the MC legal age for it to make sense
First off, thanks for the content purple_mage. I've enjoyed reading so far. A few things I'd like to say. Please work on your grammar and spelling. I think you just need to proofread a bit more and it will fix most of the mistakes. In terms of the story itself and moving forward, I think you should really keep in mind: A. pacing B. conflict . Right now the pacing is moving very fast, which is fine, but just be careful because if you do slow it down, it can be jarring for the reader. The only real downside to fast pacing is character development can be kind of neglected in favor of fast plot. In terms of conflict.. I think it's no secret that our MC is OP, and that is intended. Which is just fine. You just have to get creative to write a real conflict for him to face. Remember, not all conflicts have to involve swords and bloodshed and who has the higher cultivation realm. Finally, I REALLY hope you, in future, put some love into character development, especially for the female characters (the harem). Interactions, dialogue, maybe even dedicated chapters from the woman's perspective? A little bit of love can go a long way. I look forward to seeing where you are going to take things!
From the author of I have an countless legendary swords, the main character is more like a coward than a hidden practitioner. In literally every situation he runs, he is given the choice to run away or to act, moreover, if you convince then the rewards are average, but if you act then besides the system reward there are other possibilities that would help to cultivate faster and become stronger, but he preferred to run away and waste time
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