Great novel, the story of the brothers, is being very interesting, the character of Lay this escito very wonderfully, is one of my favorites, and the mystery of why the historical facts are changing is great, at last something different from the usual, my 10.
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I enjoy the book immensely but I need more!
AuthorI love paranormal books. I cant help myself. I hope you write more chapters so that I can catch up on my fav Kione. He makes me laugh. I cant explain why or how but all his statements are blunt and funny. Looking forward to reading more from you. Cheers.
Ce livre est génial. j'ai adoré le développement de l'histoire.
good job author for making a great story
The book is interesting to read. It seemed to be different concept than other books I read. Let's see how it will be in future
I love the setting of the book it is an intriguing story I must say bravo! author
Burn the Heretic! Kill the Mutant! Purge the Unclean!
This is a review of the first chapter. The main characters were only introduced at the end of the chapter. Instead, the story started on a dark night with a duchess who was trying to runaway from home. The author skillfully used dialogue to give different personalities to the characters. The story was in a historical mystery genre. The grammar and plot pacing was well done.
I really like your story and your way of writing but I just cant further take in and read the fact that his mother is a ***** and a slut but shows concern to him. If only that plot was changed... ha gud luck since i am dropping it.
You're book is literal trash. Plain and simple. Maybe if you read your chapter comments and took some advice it would be much better, but sadly, it's clear you don't and it shows. Does the book have the potential to be a gem? Yes, but you've ruined it. If it was only a couple mistakes and grammar errors then whatever... but sadly... every chapter makes me want throw my phone. Dozens of plot development mistakes every single chapter.