Great novel, but i just started to read it and already i feel like im not in for a good time. The story itself is not bad. but i feel like every ally or abilities are stolen from any other manga or novel.However it's a great read if you don't mind about that fact.Will continue to read might change my idea.
Great premise excited to see where it goes I’m a binge reader so I don’t usually continue after the free chapter until we get to 500 plus and then I read about every 500 or a 1000 chapter until completeI would highly recommend Grammerly! The free version, if you go back and put every chapter through it you should be able to fix a ton of critics opinions of the book❤️?
I wish I could give the writing quality more than 5 stars. Stylistically it’s one of the best novels I have read on this platform. The form and structure is also well defined. The dialogue flows, and the world building doesn’t feel like exposition, which honestly makes it already the top 10% in the originals.The characters aren’t just some cutouts and have their own quirks and habits. The background is well established and makes sense based on their personalities. I also really like the Main leads sister.The only thing is that I feel the characters, especially the Mc, are a bit too normal. I like Characters that are more expressive. However this is just my personal opionon and won’t affect the review.The story development, albeit slow, is very steady and we can already expect a lot of future events due to to foreshadowing. The MC has a clear motivation, and it’s is explained why he acts the way he does.I’ve only read until Chapter 6 but I plan on going further. The novel is definitely one worth checking out. Since even for someone like me, who is not too don’t of Sci-if, it can be enjoyable.
It is an amazing novel .✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️I love the way they are for each other. ???. Finished thr volume 1 and I hope there will be volume 2 ♥️♥️
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This book has gotten me hooked . I just hope the author would update more quickly.
I really liked your description and synopsis. The story line is quite attractive. I think you write quite well so keep on writing and update soon
I was drawn into the due how smooth everything was and how reasonable it was but after finding out that mc basically can't have any children just cause he awakened his bloodline it was kinda like a buzz plus I saw harem and r-18 In tags so I don't know if I want to continue or not cause honestly I don't see the point of being in a relationship with multiple girls if you can't have children it just seems to like that'll be boring like for all that he might as well put all his focus on getting stronger
Overall a very good novel with great worldbuilding and a clever and not dense protagonist. Although at the beginning there are some nonsensical pieces of the story that don’t really make sense like how he has so much money left and some other things. The first part is a bit hard to sit through but once you get to the second part of the novel with “Maria’s world” which is just your typical D&D world to an extent. I find the power system in this novel to be quite nice and refreshing as it’s a classic “the research of power” novel as in the MC carves the path of his power by himself.I also like how the main character developsover the course of gaining his powers. Something else I like is the great character development and focus of the “side characters”. Most of my praise for this novel goes to the second part of the novel and beyond because in my opinion the novel knly gets better from there.Thus I highly recondmend that you try out this novel!
I like this one only thing I don't like is waiting for more to come out I read all of what is here so far in less then a day and now I have been waiting for more yet i m tired of waiting
Superb cultured writing, and the plot supporting it with the mc being a former failed experimentation who had enough of the world is good. Keep going author ?
is this story so bad that it causes unpopularity?.............,very good, very recjvjvhvhvjbjbjvchvjghsjgjfjfjgkcchkohfogpdltfovpfofoofphhlhcovpjvohcgipgctioyfcgktc