Good I think I don't know what comment really
Well the story is written pretty nicely. It binds the reader with story urging them to think what's next will be there in story for them. The characters bulid up is also great with their skills. Overall the apoloclyps theme is well suited too . There is not much grammatical errors which is nice again but I feel there is too much information and explanation give.You could just casually describe a character or a scene without adding additional details . No doubt story has great potential ?
it's a good story with minor flaws, that being as the story progresses the MC's magic doesn't last as long as in previous battles but ends up being a plus because he's not so overpowered and makes the story boring.
This is a fairly well written story, except the girl who is probably going to become the female lead is very annoying and it would be better to make her have less interactions with the Mc. Not all stories need romance in them.
I can’ believe it hasn’t been even two weeks on novel timeline even though the novel is past 1000 chapters. And it is still the first arc. Writing quality is good but lack of timeline progression really bothers me.
I advise you to re-edit some of the chapters.
wow.. congratulations to your new book can't wait for more
The prologue has a very catchy phrase at the beginning. I can't wait to read the whole story. I'm still at chapter 4 but I'm already hooked.
First book that I have gone none stop! Love it!!!!
Good one author.
Rewarding a gem for more updates please
thanks you much