the grammar is not upto the mark but development characters is very good and also the power level classification is also good. I hope it will be more interesting in upcoming chapter to watch fights in higher realms
Pls update It’s to good i want more god good novel epiC
La historia es magnifica i el personage principal bien configurado la historia progresa de manera logica i las no son tan exageradas los escenarios son buenos , espero que la historia sigue a este ritmo
Do yourself a favour and don't read this. you'll get a headache , extreme cringe and lazy writing.Author is like a parrot or broken record repeating sentences nth number of times.
Great story.
The story is about Ashton a 18 year old child and nine year old Matt a adult. Both of them lived a pretty normal life of orphans but one day everything chages just cause X wanted it to. And the inhuman game of destruction begins.
Writing quality - Great, no grammar errors
Story development - Doesn't let you down, I will rather say it was fast pace no time was wasted on dally-daling.
Character design - On point, especially with Matt despite acting like adult we can clearly see his innocent side while being carefree Ashton shows the will to protect it.
World background - It gives the me Maze Runner vibes (I don't know I might be wrong about it. only author can tell property)
Should you read this novel? Of course, I will recommend it. Matt and Ashton's chemistry is on point. Though I am looking forward to Ashton's partner since I can't see Matt as someone to ship with anyone at this moment. May be my fujoshi self just need a time skip until Matt is older?
Lately I have been suffering from webnovel withdrawal syndrome but this story has caught me by surprise. The story so far is intriguing and I have fallen in love with it. The FL is described as very perceptive, smart and cautious. So far the characters are interesting and I'm hooked to the story. Looking forward to the amazing story written by one of my favourite author. Thank you for this superb story.
Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl.
Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.
Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.
Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.
World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?
Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star
Nice plot. Loved it. Quick and progressive storyline .
the author is shamelessly writing about nothing. The premise might sound funny or interesting but, I managed to push through 19 chapters and found nothing. Every chapter keeps repeating the tree wants to stay still but, the wind blows. This was garbage and whoever wrote this scam should feel bad.
I enjoyed the book a lot. Even if the protagonist comes off as rude and proud, but I'm guessing the author was going for that when he was talking in his head.Overall it's a good book. Personally I feel that there are some things that shouldn't be written so much. It takes away the mystery. Keep writing author.
It is a wonderful novel. The plot is interesting. We will always support you..............................................................................................................................................
this was a wonderful story, saddly after covid hit, they have never updated so this story will be forever incomplete. soo many good stories happened this way ?