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Hey, why jump from Chapter 211 to 215?
Lol, whats the purpose of creating a soul matrix for the mc when a human can be a lord class in 26 years(with human bloodline), this made it clear that human is superior from what i have read thus far.
Please update more stories of this author
I finished Chapter 51 on manwha, where does this translate to in the novel?
Only 77% done. There are lots of plot holes. One of them being why hasn't the flying and saving the plagiarism heavy mom discussed? Maybe it will later? Also where is our ml? Funny enough to, the antagonist is so silly. Like so far it seems as if she really did screw over the lu brothers and probably acted spoiled. This would be a good novel base for a transmigrator or system ir something. Mc is really op that its crazy. Also back to antagonist, if she spent 10 years with them, maybe not that many with the boys since they went to the forest? shouldn't she be able to coax them better? Shouldn't she be able to put her crappy ideas behind, and ..anyways, so many plot holes but this is a cute and fun read. And its short enough too. Woohoo
Loveee it, I read it non-stop for few days lol. It's just lacking romance after the reborn/reincarnation scene.
Nice
Shameless review by the author:
This is the kind of story that scratches an itch that exists only in the mind. It'll take you into a world different from our own. Inspired by many great murim/martial arts novels, it has a lot of aspects you may be familiar with but also new creations + different twists on certain tropes. I recommend this novel to anyone who hopes to see these aspects in a story:
* Revenge
* Starting from the bottom and making it up to the top
* Multiple identities that gain their own reputation in the world which he uses to his advantage
* Interesting side characters who have their own plots, growth, and resolution to their stories
* Useful love interests who don't hold the main character back but instead, grow and get powerful alongside him
Only Alternate History of Philippines i can Find here in Novel,
This book is completely a new mix of genres! The pace is very decent! Office romance, bullseye! Just the perfect blend! Tbh, the synopsis caught my attention! Keep up the good work!
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This is one of many Pokemon-esque series where an MC randomly transmigrates to a parallel world and has OP pet-identifying abilities for no reason other than the author said so.The MC is an adult who transmigrated into a teenager's body in a world similar to his, but they have magical pets and monsters. The transmigration adds nothing to the story, and the MC fits in as easily as if he spent his whole life there. He doesn't have any incongruencies to struggle through, so the transmigration is a pointless feature that could have been left out altogether. It doesn't contribute to the plot at all.The MC is a mature, intelligent, hard-worker. He hasn't shown any character flaws so far, and he hasn't had any character or personality development in the free chapters. It is nice that he has a family, even though no one is shown to have any depth to their character designs either. Weirdly enough, although the MC claims to have no interest in beauty, the writer undermines this by giving him a pet that will eventually evolve into one called "Limitless Beauty" and eventually "God of Beauty."The MC has an OP ability and an OP teacher and an OP resource and etc. from the very beginning. It looks like he's going to become overwhelmingly OP quickly.The pets train and evolve like pokemon as they grow stronger. Even their attacks have the same names as those used in pokemon. I love monster evolution, so it's fine with me. There are a limit to how many pets a person can have, so each one is precious.HOWEVER, these pets are referred to as "it" rather than he/she, even when the gender is known. Furthermore, the translation team eventually stops from referring to the lowest ranking pets as "servants" and calls them "slaves," which has a completely different connotation in English. There are also many other odd nuances that don't work well in English and distract readers from the narrative.The action isn't vivid and lacks details, so it doesn't give me any adrenaline rush. It's just not exciting. That said, the fast pace of the writing can keep it going for awhile. Unfortunately, the writing quality just isn't enough to stand up for it. Where's the conflict the MC is struggling with? Oh, there isn't one. How did the development and culture in this place differ from our world? What about the technology? Oh, it's all the same. Are there people capable of taking on the MC in the future? No, it doesn't look that way.This series is interesting and would have potential if it were reworked with a focus on character depth and development with world-building. At the level of the free chapters, though, I only see it as being good for a free casual read.
