So I cannot review the translation quality of a story with no chapters but I managed to find the raw and read up to chapter 44. However, based on the fact that he's called "Smith" and not Chen Ling worries me that the translator is going to @#$% this story up like another recent story and try to make him American.Based on the raws so far : Story is pretty interesting and bland at the same time. The main character starts off pretty decently, but at a certain point the construction and general effort that goes into his business is left in the hands of others and he becomes a salted fish only responsible for the attributes.That aside, the attribute business and how that all has been handled so far was very interesting to me. So despite the salted fish of a MC, I'm hoping to see this story released and translated properly.Fair warning : There may end up being some nationalism/racism in this novel. The dude builds stuff that have attributes, this does not go unnoticed. Foreign countries do seem to be getting involved and the MC does start being overseen in a way by his own government. It's obvious the MC is going to support China. This may be why translators are switching nationalities of MCs when they translate recently, so it'll be Americans being racist and not Chinese.
I've written a significant part of this novel before posting it, well not significant but enough of it. it's basically a slice of life cultivation novel, but not the jovial kind, this is a slow burn with a main character focused on revenge and getting stronger. facets and aspects of cultivation would be explored in more depth than is seen in most other novels, there will be politics, questionable decisions, mature themes, wars, and perhaps a little bit of army building. maybe a city or sect building adventure, but who knows. unlike all my other novels, this one does not have a system of any sort. everything is as realistic as I can possibly make it, chronicling the corruption of an innocent boy due to tragedies of life into a villain that quite frankly is as flawed and raw and real as anyone else. he doesn't win all his battles, he looses some, he runs away some times, but he always comes out on top. I'll try not rely too much on plot armor, just hard work and guts and maybe some luck. also fair warning this is a Harem story, however it's not a romantic one. please give this a chance, thanks so much for reading.
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As many have accented earlier, I too am not entirely happy with the volactile personality of Ren and other characters, but what amazes me most is the fact that the title contains the word "alchemy
still waiting for the 999 skills robbed ?. Deserved a better novel name. However its been interesting so far at Ch 40. Looking forward to more chapters and hope tge update continues to stay stable
I must say good story though I haven’t reached far yet. The story so far has been alright the mc fits the tittle villain but the only downside I have is that it doesn’t give off a dark novel feel but apart from that it good
Good for now. (Ch47)
Great read, looking forward to more of it, I quite like the interesting storyline and premise the author went with and can't wait to see how it goes.
clueless mc about his powers , the mc has a system and his power as you guess from the title is about speed , sometimes the mc forget some of his skills ch(0-63) thats as far i have gone by the time i posted this review but i will keep reading more and more because i like it , i might not be able to edit or forget to do it in the future , love the world building , characters , writing quality , and the story that is currently progressing
This novel has a lot of misunderstandings and unnecessary drama.- The MC abandoned his wife and daughter to go to the army and become a man worthy of his wife and do not humiliate him anymore, but when he meets his wife and daughter, he does not show that he has improved . So what use were all those years of effort?- The MC is the worst, it has no dignity and pride because it is easily humiliated and insulted by anyone and it does not defend itself or retaliate.- The MC is an important figure in the army, owner of a large company and claims to be capable but when the time comes to prove that he is worthy, he acts like a fool and decides to hide his identity ...- All the characters lack intelligence and personality.(In conclusion, this novel is mediocre and lacks originality)Note: this review was written using the google translator.
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