Amazing book so far. Hope you get better at start writing soon. ?I love Rowan as a character at i feel he is really relatable since people can be awful sometimes and sometime they take for granted many things however Rowan keeps moving forward through ignore these people even if he get bruises. GET BETTER SOON ??
Dear authour the story was really good. Though u could have added some more chapers. Hope you would give us some more exiting novels like this hope to read soon love u authour. ?????????????????????????????????????????????
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don't waste ur time ... only racisism is main plot hear......racisism also have some limits...but this author surpassed all......it is increases as the no of chap increses
the author constantly nerfs the mc so he has to actually plan his fights and be smart witch can be good but his plans are never drawn out and the mc seems kinda dumb. then the author throws him into a different reality and makes him restart from the beginning also switches his personality 180 degrees not worth reading
Don't read this if you're obsessed with tiny details, the story is most enjoyable when viewed on the bigger picture. The MC is an absolute joy to read with his crazy yet somewhat unrealistic ideas, it's amazing seeing the repercussions and cause of his actions, despite knowing it'll be a short novel it's a joy to read in bursts!
The story is really tells about the eternal love .... eternal considering revival of amorous scenes of lovers. The story also justified the rebirth of one of the lovers while one waits.... tor his reincarnation... They meet .... that's is it.
Hi, your book is really good, but I noticed some errors, if you're in need of a proofreader, I can do it for free. I like how you sometimes make a serious situation seem funny, keep up the good work ✍???
What is this novel's original name in Chinese?
another standard trash xianxia novel. no plot, no character development just things leading to different things, a useless tournament leading to useless outcomes. seriously even the author doesn't know what to write next.
All around good book. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One of the first mafia novels I have ever read so if I say some stupid stuff I am sorryFirst off, writing quality. Fair warning I am not very privy to small details when I am reading. So far (33 chapters) the writing quality has been great. Little to no mistakes (that I noticed) and even the small mistakes that I spotted (like two) barely affected my reading so great job there author! Five starsUpdating stability- Just started reading today so no idea about this. Story development- Over the course of the story, many interesting events continued to happen and the actions the mc and other charcters took were very interesting and kept me very engaged. Again very well executed author. Five starsCharacter design- I would go into detail about all the little things that I liked but that would spoil the story so I won’t. However I will say that the challenges and things that head towards the mc and how it develops not only him but the people around him is very pleasing to read. Five starsWorld background- Since we are only 33 chapters in and the world seems very much based on the real world (which makes sense really) no complaints here. Not only that but the way the world is slowly developed alongside the mc’s life and escapades make the story so much more interesting since you never know what new thing will show up next. Five starsAll in all, a very interesting and pleasing story to rear with its own charm perfectly executed. Also the way the author showcases the intelligence and cunning of the mc and his skills as a mafia leader is very well done amking the story that much more exciting. 10/10Last and final point, Nero cause Nero. Nero approves.