only giving update stability a 4 because I understand life is random heck I spend up to 6 months a year with no service. For anyone that's questioning doing so give this book a try its amazingly well written, development is great personality differences are amazing to see in different prospectives from certain characters point of view. Honestly I was hooked from chapter one and am hopefully waiting for many more the author is amazing and deserves tons of support but don't take my word for it alone try this book and I'm willing to bet you'll agree with me.
Noice
It´s a very nice story with alot of depth. I am definitly going to read as much as i can. I reccomend this for anyone who wants to try it. Also author please make as many chapters as you can.
Stealing is wrong. Don't steal. Why would you steal other people's work like this? I mean really? Come on now. Have some small speck of self respect.
Hey what's happening here? Many novels are being migrated again? hoping the updates keeps coming! I think some novels (i guess all) haven't announced that they'll transfer to Qidian ?
It's pure 100% crap, the writing quality is so bad I can't even stand the thought of reading the whole story, everything is really bad for ex. The author writes stuff written down redundantly ITS VERY REDUNDANT, I bet the author's vocabulary is comparable to a 12 year old child, sometimes the author tries to be smart and writes "high vocab" words but fail miserably, I mean it doesn't match withThe stuff She/he writes down it is completely unbalanced. My point is Don't Read This Shit
The character is a depiction of a real indian family and the whole infamily foghting feels exactly,can relate to a huge degree,The background is so great ,its real,update is good, I love it and recommend whoever is reading this to atleast read ten chapters before you write a bad review
The book is quite good and funny ? ? ?, I would love to read more. I'm currently at chapter 11 and honestly loving it, can't wait for more books like this. This is pure innovation ?!
I realy just wanted to write you a private message but couldn't find how sorry its a somewhat bad review but i will explain as much as i can and hopefully it will help in some way. Please take it as a constructive critism.After getting that out of the way the next section:Writing Quality - pretty good no mispelled words or typos in general so thats a plus.The writing style on the other hand could be better - the way you describe the outside world and the character's inner world is either lacking or childish either way i suggest you reaserch and practice more on those - will be mentioned again on 'characters'.Stability of Updates - every day! which is way better than most so 5/5 on that.Story Develepment - Pretty bad realy, the story is more 'character driven' meaning MC going around doing what feels right with no concrete theme or plot.Example of a plot: "we need to destroy this evil ring in a distant and dangerous place" cliche i know but its a good classic plot.another point regarding plot - i would like to introduce a thing to you called 'Chekhov's gun' basically its a term based on a saying of a famous writer, he said thus: "If in the first act you have hung a pistol on the wall, then in the following one it should be fired. Otherwise don't put it there."(Please research this further it involves more princple and will help you!)What i'm saying is: you have randomness in the story, now surprises or "suddeness" for lack of better word, is not bad but randomness is, what i mean is if a hungry wolf showed and begged for leftovers near the fire he doesnt just bolt right away and never apears again he should be back some day and it will be relevant (if you did things well that is) but you barely gave it one paragraph we know so little about that wolf that even if he did come back it will not be cool or meaningful.we slowly make our way into --World Background - because the same point is relevant there as wellin some instances MC is walking around town talking to merchants, buying/selling or admiring merchandise.when in that town they stay at an in and you gave some attention to a Lily character that worked there.in all those situation and MORE there is no effing interactions!! ZERO!!!he doesnt talk to the barmaid at all, the cool merchant selling the most expensive enchnted wepons just nods once at the MC friend while polishing a sword.Even the cool hammer thing didn't have a symbol so they can later find the blacksmith of the thing and establish some connction.Basically you show zero planning ahead, more than that, you leave your world barren from the thing that give life to a world like local rumors/humor/sayings/etc and that leaves your world building in the gutter compared to what it COULD be.Character Design - In a first look it looks like they are a bit 2 dimensional, like their inner world isnt very well developed but i tend to belive you have a good grasp of the chrarcter you want them to have, but just CANT bring it out properly meaning you don't express them correctly or well enough which connects us to style which i discussed before.Thank you fo reading this far and sorry about the spelling which is probably not perfect. I hope i got my points across and hope you will notice such things and plan better as you go along.I would also like yo point out i don't hate the story and may continue to read it my personal enjoyment is 7/10 which is pretty good.There is more to say but this should be good for now.
Kang XingThe main character in this novel, He managed to reincarnate in his own body after 200 years.And accompanied by the number five Villain system, the adventure of his life has begun again to avenge him.
Typical Generic XianxiaAt first, seem fun but eventually you all gradually boring with this storyIf you just want to spend your time than this is for you
A story made of cliched plot points. The MC being a reborn world jumper, the parents poor, and the father a blindly trusting fool to name a few. I'm amazed that the author can shove so many crap ways to show the dad being an idiot in one chapter. I'm stopping my reading at chapter 39 since I just can't take the crap contained by it anymore. I know the market is flooded and you have to be a bit nationalist with your leanings but this novel seems to exhibit how the average citizen's interaction with the government is always like dealing with a corrupt official. And the antagonist is a 5-6 year old girl referred to as "Lolita". No doubt she'll start loving the MC at some point soon. It's just bad. Author should stop writting this and lay out the plot trajectory for the first Arc and restart it from the beginning with the same world and characters. The place and some people have a good setup but are handled badly so the story is just not worth the time to read or translate.