But that was not the worst thing. I clearly understood how strong it is. His control is almost as good as Edmund's, and pure magical power is even slightly greater than his.
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Jin Yahui could hear the giggles of the Music System when he looked down at his bare feet. "Shut up," he muttered.
I think it looks decent. So I will at least give rating and wait to read I guess. The character design looks really nice so 5 stars for that.
Congrats on reaching 200 chapters and keep doing what your doing. The book is great and I hope this searies continues on for anouther 200 episodes while there are episodes still being released i will give u all the stones from all my accounts. Keep up the great work
Interesting plot and the storyline is smooth.The way he handles things and the way he received honor points from system (spirit) was was kinda satisfying. There were few scenario's were MC acted like a child (well practically he is 15) as if embarrassing his rival and considering it as a small victory. Well, she killed (atleast she ordered the death of) MC's parents and his way of revenge looked questionable. And FL knew all of his powers in advance so it kinda feels stagnant. It would be cool if he could inherit something different from previous timeline due to butterfly effect. I'd say though there were few mishaps, it is an interesting story and worth the read.
"Alright. Another thing is that you're not invincible with the compressed air protection. None of this will help against bullets, as we're not powerful enough to stop bullets in midair. Redirect them, yeah, but not directly in front. Also, you can only generate the compression to about a meter in front of you. That's another flaw in the system, but it makes up for it big-time."
She put the phone in her lap and grabbed chopsticks in one hand and her bottle in the other. A quick twist with her hand and it let out a carbonated protest. After quenching the worst of her thirst she allowed her lunchbox to make the phone company on her lap and went to work with her chopsticks.
I like the writing quality of Author. I find plot line very interesting very interesting to my choice. I am looking forward to it. Go with Auxilary to see character design.
intresting I am going to add this to my Library
Overall, it's an awesome book so far. I've been having trouble finding something that could draw me in and keep me hooked and this one really hit the spot, I can't wait for more chapters and hope the quality keeps up. Thanks for the awesome read
This story is quite interesting. Writing quality. The story-telling was easy to read. Stability of Updates. So far, the author has a stable update. Story Development flows smoothly. Character design and World Background. They are written well and can be fleshed out more. Keep it up, author!