All i can say is even if the story need improvment the character need more work because when the MC said one word everyone is like "yeah that makr sense " like if a normal people after being shout by someone will want to help them just because of some principle of the MC everyone now is playing hero saving people even if their own people die.This story is good for the people who think that "everyone need a second chance" but sorry to tell yiu when you got fired by someone in your right mind you won't think to save them i wanr to say it's a trash story just because of the Mc but whatever.Normal novel (MC fault).
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I’m giving it a straight 5 out of 5. At first when I read this book, it was only few chapters along, and I thought it was pretty good so I saved it to library. After reading it for a Monty or so, I really feel it was a good decision. From the start, the storyline was quite simple. But as it progressed to 100+, it has become more and more complicated. How the development would keep going. And more excited to know more about what would happen if Lucien meets all his sisters and his mysterious mother. ??
5 chapters in! Time for a review!This story's got quite an interesting start and it helped making the readers anticipate what could be coming next Instead of starting of with world introduction or setting introduction, you got to the action right away which is clever!I also like how you slowly introduce the characters and stuff after that It's quite refreshing for this genre! Still, the story could use some more researchs on Japanese cultures and naming, so that it sounds more convincing, now that the cast still feel a bit Western and could confuse some readers.btw keep up the good work, author! You're doing great! ???
Good story interesting read. It’s a common plot but it’s still good can’t wait for the next chapter. The only thing is that it leaves you waiting for more info about mc past
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Very fun to read ,the humors are on point
A great read. There are some grammar issues and some paragraphs need some fluidity but everyone makes mistakes. Looking forward to the MC's relationship. A memory-loss MC is a rare catch on this site. I'm looking forward to events that will bring some sort of PTSD symptoms, like when he kills accidentally to protect.
Thanks for this...First im biased, #rawreaderIts great detailed on Childhood arcI hate on rape act so I skip its detail, but I know what happen to her... so sad.After on England, I love it... How villain (mc) scheme and BDSM from a man who truly insanely love her... I love it...'Everyone won, just im lose' line, killing anyone...believe me
The story plot is good and characters design as well but but the way you write the convo and the person who converse made me confused maybe because its different form from what i have usually read. But this is only my opinion and so far its quite interesting. More power to you and write more?
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