Love this book, can wait to see what happens next
I never expected to find such a rollercoaster of laughter in a story about undead getting bored and trying out something new, give it a try, and decide for yourself ? ! The writing kept me drooling for more, the author knows what he's doing and I'm impatient to keep reading ?
I was searching the app on a wild whim and found this absolute gem, I have never been so addicted to anything in my life. I binged almost all the current chapters in two days and still want more.The characters are written well enough and enough fitting humor is added to keep me entertained no matter how long I read it.
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Really love the story till now, I like how it basically takes every other “in a novel I read” novel and combines it into one by making it so that he goes to different novels but maintains some privileges so that he’s not back to zero and slowly progresses again.
The writing itself is top notch. Most of the rest is a bit early to tell, but I can say one thing. The writing is solid. My only real gripe is that the spacing in the chapter itself is a bit odd. I would just go through and put some spaces between paragraphs for ease of reading. Otherwise a fantastic start.
The translation quality is awful. Also guns in a cultivation novel? It doesn’t make sense for the most part.
The writing was fantastic! From the grammar to the vocabulary, to the imagery and flow, everything was absolutely stellar! The only gripe I have (which is definitely more of a personal opinion than anything the author did wrong) is the average length of the paragraphs. They strike me as more of a light novel format, rather than being created as a Webnovel. Other than that, fantastic job!
This novel is good ...there are comedic element...mc is not dumb but other characters are ....overall enjoyable*.*this novel is written by the author of night ranger****bad luck for this novel to be in this segment as it not gonna get selected due to ""my senior brother is to steady""**
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At first you may find the story repitive. The author is doing so since the character has to go through the same thing over and over again too. Sometimes you may feel like your life is going in circles. This is a journey of one person's journey to proving his innocence. He has to conquer many things just as many as I have I assume you have too.While I was reading the story I was going to stop reading it and leave it. Now I'm reviewing it in hopes that I can convince you to read it and not to give up at least till chapter 19. So go ahead give it a try I am certain that you are going to enjoy this journey as much as I love it so far .A journey is the adventure the destination is just the stop over to the next journey. Put on your walking gear. Take some notes you may find out that you may need the information