Redsunworld
So far, I think that this new book is amazing.It clicked with me from the very beginning, the transition from one prison to another (albeit under different conditions) was seemless.And I do hope to see how far this book is going to go. I can't wait to see this story's power system. Keep it up Reilli.
Fp is all I need.Fp fphhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Well, looks like another novel is being dropped.. Paid so much on Privilege too... Sad to see it go like that.
A good book with a good premise and story ^^ I can't wait to see what the author cooks up from here on out! if you like stories like this one I def recommend
Not bad for beginner actually . The plot is kinda superb btw.The writer always update their work frequently. There is no backstory and the beginning is not really good but the character development is nice .
This is a return gift from this junior to the senior. I haven't gotten enough time to read this precious work of yours yet, but I have been enlightened by your previous novel "The lustful young master is sinister".By the way, I really liked the synopsis. It's really thought out thoroughly.
Let me give an example why i rate this. All the example happen in the chapter.1. Author math skill is kindergarden.2. There is no spatial ring but the enemy suddenly have a golem, a robot, a fkin laser gun in his ass.3. which one is important your *** time or your family live ? In author case he choose ***. Smh. 4. Why the fk there is no screening when recruit a soldier. Why the fk a soldier can join private organization ? Do u want the military itself to collapse ? 5. The fighting in military base did not alert other. Even with a robot with nuclear energy blowing up. 6. The military base defence system is fkin weak that even summoning an evil spirit or in middle of the base did not alert their system defence. Not to mention no anti teleport defence. Wtf. Its a fkin military base not your fkin grandfather house.
This is a fun read! I didn't bore out after reading the first chapter and to my surprise, I already went to another pages! The first person narration was cut above the rest and I know the author was learning how to perfect his craft. This kind of novel was up to my alley and I like its dark theme. More power to you author as you pave this solitary journey. You got potential! You know that? ?
I'll give 5 stars as keep up the good work, but seriously give me a chapter flush or something i can't really tell how good this is actually
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this8. You see the mistake right? (on7)10. But did you see I skipped number 6?10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 913. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this.( You got tricked )
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