I love this story! MC is excellent and love the no hero complex and is evil but not villain, just out for himself. Writing quality definitely needs work. I’m confused half the time and have to reread sentences atleast twice since grammar is way off. But I really want to know if you’re still going to finish? I never see updates and have been waiting ages. I have reread multiple times but I want it finished atleast. Killing me with no ending and how slow is updating. Are you still working on this story?!
The book is interesting... It plot is okay as well as the character.... The characters description is also vivid enough for one to be able to imagine the scenes that took place in it... So it deserves to be one of the best
An excellent example of a necromancer style character that isn’t a complete weakling or absolutely broken. It’s sadly only 36 chapters long so far but the writing so far gives me hope for the future of this story. For what it is right now though it is well done.
I love !!I sincerely hope that it will be chosen otherwise, I will make a nice fireworks display in my neighborhood, nobody will die ...., maybe not .
I dont unterstand why would the son of a clan head that knows how cruel fang yaun can be take the risk of angering him for a petty inheritence, he is in the clan head faction it is not like he is in a rush to leave he has the timetable to everything that is going to happen and it seems he could have been rank 3 by working hard and using the clan resources then leave by faking his death or something just before everything goes apeshit, he could literally just buy a relic gu in the in the caravan and the problem is solved. it is utterly ridiculous imo to take that kind of risk for a mortal inheritence it's not like it is an immortal one.Also the ren zu legends ending is utter non sense (no offense) if it was that clear, thieving heaven verenerable would have guessed it too and there would have been records of him collecting the 10 perfect physics when we know that the 10 perfect physics are used to create the rank 9 phoetus gu not some bullshit portal to earth.As they say mc can never be smarter than the author.
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I like your story, especially the way uou described the scenes. I feel like I was watching a movie. You are a skilled author. Way to go ???
monster mc fan here.GIVING 5 star review cuz there are so little monster mc here.........................................................................
Rebirth -✔Apocaly**e -✔ It's really interesting story. Not so typical teenage or younger versions rebirth. More mature and smell what older guys here so yep it's a interesting story with nice organization and development.. so keep your work.. it's really good. ❤