Standard reincarnation litrpg, first two volumes are on Amazon, I would recommend you read them. The author can be a little slow to post chapters but other then that great book.
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This is basically a collection of random things throughout human history. It might give you a laugh or two.Tell me how I can improve.I'm always open to constructive criticism.
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Absolutely love it! I can't explain why I love it without spoiling, but this is a definite should read!The world background is laid out perfectly without interrupting the flow of the story, the development of the story is excellent, and the writing quality is wonderful. I love the main character, and it's not even that far into the story yet!This novel is easy to read and has a fascinating plot!
Written in this review is personal opinion no offenseWhen I've read the synopsis I thought it's good but the author keeps getting off track with the story and I can't emerse myself with it. So I'll stop reading it.
Thank you author for your effort and this story. The story kept me going chapter after chapter. I have yet to finish hence picking it up to my reading list and dropping you my review. Here are my comments1. The whole story built up is commendable - truly well done from the start of how villin witnessed the death of the boy’s parents and taken in by the Silver to how he was trained until he enter the academy. The background to him attaining the different level of knowlege of a magus is well described 2. Creativity in plot and ability to draw the description of scenes allowing users to visualise clearly. As i read the chapters i am able to visualize each scene clearly. Eg. how the academy looks like, the classes, the time when Villin touch the crystal to his awakening, the corridor to the classes, the battle between Aiden and Amelia, the attack from Rolland to Villin - i could visualise it clearly as a result of the vivid description including the “test” set out by Pompei for his students how the fire ball went towards Kayley and Villin. Also the part where Villin fixed the crystal holder in class.3. Content structure. It takes a lot to think through the content for such magical realm and world - this is done well and delivered effectively by the author from the use of wands, to web nodes awakening to wandless curses and spells. The classes and grades and lessons that are taught - i enjoy reading and deciphering these content. 4. Peak and story climax - i am reading from competitive student battle (aiden and amelia, Villin and his oponent on crease and cut) more and more exciting part from attacks to battles and surprises - this leaves readers stuck on the narrative turning one chapter to another - good manouvering on the plot leaving trails of excitement here and there. Absolutely a must read for Harry Porter fans alike or magical fantasy - great built up of the entire world of magic. Look forward to read how Villin’s character will further evolve into and perhaps mega battle of the magical kingdom and forces to come. Good job author in putting in the effort for book. Keep up the good work!
The first few chapters are great, but as the story goes on there are many grammatical errors and the worst part is that the power level of every charcter is changing.In one chapter Davis's power rank is demon lord rank nine and in the next cahpter it becomes demon lord rank 7.Ther is also Fiona who's power Principality Rank 4 and then in the next chapter it went all the way down to power rank
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Ohhhh mah goaj So-s-so much FILL-f-filler. No but seriously what is all this filler? Nai.ve mc with no logic at friggin all like bruh. 140140140140140140140140140
Other than the really bad dog abuse, (basically buying dogs to use for dungeon boss baiting, yes, exactly like bear baiting). Which MC does once, and there are hints that he may one day be punished by the system or the gods. But OTHER than that, it's a fairly well crafted tale of a guy whose weird, missing uncle with all the crazy adventure stories, suddenly sends him a PC tower connected to a multi-universe dungeon instance creation system. Being a hacked in version he doesn't get exp, but he does get to loot. So yeah, pretty good, besides the stuff with the dogs, which I hate but realize much of the world regards dogs as tools and not family members(and no dog hotpot has been mentioned in this one, so there is that)
I have ready so far 6/6 and am hoping for more because I really like how this is turning out. Keep going author and never give up, you got this