For me everything is PERFECT!It keeps me thrilled,makes me laugh, sad/cry, happy, etc.Almost all emotions I've experienced through this story.My favorite parts is when Fin and Ain is hangs out/about Fin and Ain, and the parts when it makes me laugh, OH, ESPECIALLY when Ain sacrificed for her people "From the start when Athena Family attacks the Solan Fam until the End when The Godfather, become materialized." PS. It was the most part I cried UWAHHH, I also matched it with the song (Unstoppable). <3I think updating the chapters is too long for me ?, please post the new chapters, much early. <3 But no worries, I know how hard you make the story, I understand, its just me being impatient because its AWESOME.
The story is great, the beginning is enthralling. I really appreciate your work and creativity The synopsis is also attractive???.The way you plotted Characters is admirable?. This novel is also very interesting like your another novel and I want to read it further so keep writing like this dude??u200d♂️?
Is it dropped? It's been 10 days since the last update
Chapter 6 review.Everything is full of plot holes and everyone act like a dubm 2d side character fullly made of cliches.I would suggest to stay away if you ever read a global... I awakened as..... And..... And become powerful through my.....
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
So... Where should I begin? The story looks interesting and I notice that the author did try describing the characters and the setting so we, readers, could imagine it. The problem with this was that the author over-described (if that's a word) both things. It made the story confusing instead of making it clear. The second thing is punctuation and grammar. There are too many run-off sentences while describing the characters. Use periods and commas. They are your friends. Also, use a grammar corrector program like Grammarly or just write your draft in MS Word so it corrects the mistakes before you post the story. Remember, good grammar can captivate the audience in this sea of stories. I do think that with a bit of polishing and editing, your story could go far.
Good good good good Good good good good Good good good good Good good good good Good good good good Good good good good Good good good good Good good good good Good good good good
It was okay in the first half of the book and the concept was fine. But like many non human novels, it was spoilt by the fact that the MC started interacting with humans making him less monster like.
Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp ????????????????????????????????????????????☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.Loved it.
This novel is bloody fantastic, and I am legitimately confused as to why it has never come over before. It has been completely translated, and it's outrageously good, so why do they bring over so many trash novels? Anyway check this one out.
Love the concept and idea. no one ever uses Otsutsuki clan XDkeep up the writing, it is nice and smooth, and it is hard for me to find a nice fan fic. this classifys as good for meso keep up good work XD