Thank you for the chappie!
The straws has been pulled, and the King, the one that draw the marked straw, gave an order to the other player..
With that smile, while watching the ptero-drago creature react accordingly to my plan, I go down.
"Captain. Forgive us. Please ignore us--"
He waited, and waited...for the sun to go down...
They met Flower in Venom City and she was with Rain. Flower is now a middle stage Emperor, while Rain is a peak level Emperor. Flower formed the life domain and Rain formed the Shadow Wind domain.
and one more thing! actually i wanted to kill you when the universe was destroyed but
Waiting!!!!!!!!!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!
The story is full of Yuri and there is not even Yuri tag bro, don't do this dude. Just put the Yuri tag. Not all of the readers have cuck fetish like you.
I want to bring it to your attention that You haven't touched the emotional part of the story at all. Just train and train more. He has friends, he can laugh and talk merrily. So why is he so cold to his teammates'(uchiha) impending doom? Or not even doing anything in that regard.Forget about doing anything, Author, you haven't written anything on the emotional part here.. like feeling sad? feeling anxious? lost? What? nothing here.It just feels like a guy with autistic wrote a lame book. I hope you correct that.Everything else is good.
The female lead is really intelligent and smart. I like her. I hope her life will not end miserable.
good read but most of the logic is not logicking for me at all XD.