I'm a dog I love spring rolls and I like your novel! Keep it writing don't drop this!
I'm a dog I love spring rolls and I like your novel! Keep it writing don't drop this!
I'm a dog I love spring rolls and I like your novel! Keep it writing don't drop this!
Since most authors vote 5 stars for their novels, I shall follow their example and do the same.
Jokes aside, I would appreciate it if you could leave behind constructive criticism regarding my novel.
Also, treat this 'Review' as a Q&A
-Ask me whatever you want regarding the novel, and I'll try my best to answer you (As long as there aren't any spoilers)
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I've only read a few chapters, but I've read some system esque books before, and I can say this is going to be a great read. The Backstory is super helpful, and the greatest thing about it is that this is the first time I've seen anything like everyone having a system. I think it's a unique book, and I look forward to reading More!!
I'm just in chapter eight and I'm already intrigued
Is it weird that I'm inlove with both Zayden and Xander?❤️
Ughh these guys are just so cute and funny?❤️
not bad first chapter keep up the good work
it's strong start with good story line with a simple main character background
my first impression of the story and that it lacks experience and care in its development, but that the author has a lot of reading baggage (I recommend reading some Korean novels, they have many good works on this escalation from the lower world to the upper), he it avoids errors that I am tired of reading. it is worth following at least until his rise to the intermediary world and see if the errors that bothers me in the work will change.Writing Quality: ok, very decent you are well located and you know what is happening, just stop repeating information that we already know (he has experience you don't need to repeat it so many times he has a stronger body we already understand that too)Stability of Updates: I don’t know, I started reading yesterday (and I’m finished (chap 96)) But I think 2 a day and very good stories need more thought which is one of the problems of this workStory Development: it has its problems, like out of hours or very sudden team skips but its ok, the problem comes in the gain and development of the intention to kill that could be more worked and more challenging because it just comes out of nowhere, it fights and it improvement he suffers and it improves happens very fast without a real challenge for something that should only grow with a life or death challenge, the fights with demonic beasts in the beginning of the story only occurred because he is absolutely sure that he will not die not only because he has experience (at least it seemed like this for me) the animals are treated as if they were stupid / arrogant (or as you call them "inexperienced") which is not a characteristic of animals but of humans (cats have fought once in their lives try to get close to a cat that you don't know or dog, there are those that will accept the approach but in the majority they will have some reaction or alert or withdrawal they will not just ignore you).
ok was I the only one who expected mechas here?
by mechs this story is referring to androids or combat robots If you will.
nevertheless this is not the reason I Jared this story.
the reason is it has NO SOUL.
AND THE STORY TELLING SUCKS.
like the author is so bad at this, he has used the most irritating wuxia trope and magnified it a hundred times over.
This story has nothing but killing, killing, and killing
hundreds of random side characters
each time a villain is killed two stringer ones stand up in its place.
like some sort of levelling quest.
the same repetitive cycle.
for the first 40 chapters.
the guys seems to be moving is a different direction towards the end bit that doesn't compensate the lack of story.
I know almost nothing about the main character.
who he was, what are his hopes and dreams.
and the most important
WHAT IS HIS MOTIVATION?
WHY THE HELL IS HE FIGHTING SO HARD AND KILLING PEOPLE AROUND.
no proper explanation given, the guy is like oh I was transmigrated, a face slap there another face slap here.
he stands in my way kill!
he looks ugly kill!
he said something annoying kill!
what normal person starts killing at the blink of an eye.
without an even proper motivation to begin!
Write a review Reading Status: C12
Writing Quality: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Nearly perfect without any grammatical error (in my opinion)
Stability of Updates: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (Nothing to say here)
Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ One word ''SOLID''
Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ A Transmigrator with a load of knowledge from the past. I quite like the Initial Impression and action of our MC
World Background: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ''ORIGINAL''
The total score: 5.0
They really took it off the trials... Come on webnovel!
Good book, premise is basically MC transmigrates, cultivates to Golden Core then dies and gets a system. Clan/Sect management. Interesting characters and the world building is pretty nice.
If you want to continue reading, head over to MTLNovel. Sad I can't read a properly translated version but I guess that's Qidian for you.
i love this kind of novels, damn, for me is really hard to find this. It has al the tags i like and for the chapter i read the story is going well
I'm not used to writing reviews, but I'm going to do it here because I really like this story.
First of all, the author is experienced, he has already written something good and it shows, the descriptions are well done and the characters have well defined personalities.
Then, the world is interesting, a large number of classes seem to be predicted and we can expect great battles against powerful monsters or nasty players.
Finally, the update rate, at the beginning I had some reservations, but the author promised to publish more chapter.
In short, it is a good novel, I advise you.