Prather_DuBois
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This novel is amazing I love it. The story line is fun the orc pov is really done well.Plus the plot isn't just forced or just has plot armor! it works the way it's meant to and makes sense, and to be honest that's all you need to get 5 stars from me.Though sometimes the writing quality dips a bit, ik you've said before you plan to do a mass correction thing and tbh they are just a few spelling mistakes here and there so here is the 5 star for writing quality ahead of time!But make sure to correct them all!dont let me down!!!!!!and keep being awesome (also I don't mind the other pov thing but so others don't complain keep it to 2 POVs and clearly write Alex's POV or POV ??? / unknownor something like that, so they don't get confused )thank for reading here's one year's worth of luck you'll need it for 2021
Very recommend comedy cultivation novel. Mc is transmigrated into unusual cultivation world where the face value is above everything. Actually the tittle of the novel is a bit misleading, the mc isn’t suck at cultivation it’s just his cultivation technique that too overbearing to the point he needs 3 years to reach refining realm (most basic realm) however the mc didn’t anything about how Op his cultivation technique that he cultivated *be aware this is spoiler*His face value is too high which make heaven and earth favored him very much. This story is full misunderstanding. Everyone thinks that mc is ready to ascend but reality is he still stuck in the lowest realm. However, his wisdom is superb that makes him gain a lot of merit and everyone regard his as a saint teacher. Supporting characters are funny as hell especially his junior brother who always follow the mc, he is my favorite character in this novel. As for enemy, there are enemies who jealous of his destiny so they want to kill him and steal his destiny for their own good.Anyway, this novel is a bit nasionalism but that doesn’t bother me too much. Over all this novel is good.
The sypnosis really caught my attention. Didn't expect this book to be this good. You've done a good job, author! Keep it up! I would willing to wait for the upcoming chapters❤❤
