Prather_DuBois
I'm planting my flag here before this novel takes off. I can tell the author reads on WN because the mc is drowning in every cliche imaginable, and hates his life. He knows what's coming and he doesn't want any part of it. That's what makes it interesting.It's cleverly written, witty, and dark. The dialogue is great and the first "fight" alone shows the book isn't one dimensional. It's a good read
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wondered why I am wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked )
This novel would have been a ~4 stars if you actually wrote the novel instead or infringing on someone else translation, possibly leading to a lawsuit for plagiarizing work other than yourself.
Chapter 350 and stopped. This is to tiering for me! No villains die and all of them are making the MC piss his pants when they appear (even though he has knowledge beyond everyone else).His idea of cunningness and steeling is nice but never used properly, when he has great moments next time he speaks of his ass making enemy just for the sake of the plot.Here women are literally all h***s (one admits that she f***d around 1500 guys in 5 years!) and every woman is either raped or she is selling herself just for some money or titles. Not to mention that more than 50% of the novel is about f****g women. Even she-bears from the wiled are abducted and f***d. Nothing is spared. This bullshat is so annoying that even when people fight, one guy who trains is p****s every day lifting heavy metals whit it so he could f***k more, uses his p***s to fight and his subordinates to f***k themselves so he could enchant people around him whit erotic thought.As for the MC, he is spinless and when everyone fucks around him, his bullshat`s women his training his yang so he can`t sleep whit them only to be rape by a slot who had f***d someone for 2000 years and got bored so to make jealous her man, she rapes our MC and tells him that she was the last man on this planet she would f****k but becouse she got borde she had to do and now, everyone knows she was raped by him and he his hunted by the most heroic and brave hero in this world who got cuckholded.There are chapters (and a big number of them) where I felt I was ready about different novels mostly because this persons who are all enemies of the MC are big influence people from Chinese stories so to fully understand waths going on, either you have to read on the wiki or make assumptions what the heck is going on because the complex motives behind there actions. (of course complex motive all end in being either mother ****ed or wifes raped and so on).Not to mention, MC cried desperately and complains his all alone in this world, where not long ago he swore brotherhood whit so many people, who despised he wants power, he uses it on his new friends to level them up.Another annoying thing, here everyone after killing, raping and doing despicable things, trying to kill MC every second, are all forgotten once the arc is settled, where most of the guys survive for a cheap reason. There are many other irritating things that make my hair stand but I'm too tired to writhe it down.Not to mention, MC has killed many innocent people but at some point, he arrogantly stands out for a prostitute making the entire story seem so cheap that makes me puke.Of course, there are also good things in it and one of them is side charters have some charm and development, ill try to give it a change later but from the way I see it, much won't change. I even suspect his love interest would go NTR on him, on how much NTR is in this story. Not saying it yet it happened but how lame the MC is acting, I can see it happen.
I Think the author even though he said that it was free but what the hell you keep the rest on your patron page.the character sound immature like tell me do you think we are reading for joke we are reading to uplift boredom not to bore us to death
Nice story the story is an eye opener and it gave me ideas not just one but many for my next story
I binge read this story because it was so good please keep wring it it is a amazing story. I love Harry’s character in this and I feel it’s a very amazing story.
this sounds so interesting!! i need to read this!!
Author's review?Yea, I suck in a lot of ways and you can find those ways in my books. I am not going to tell you that it is this and that and that and this and that. Let the story speak for itself. appreciate my work with reviews and comment, I love to communicate with readers and make sure to vote for this book.ah, right and I dedicate this five stars to how much the book sucks
Honestly, the first 5 chapters had some mistakes but I persevere a little bit too since I'm interested in the plot. It was pretty obvious the author was a newbie in writing and always asked for help and advice. But as I read further, I can see his improvements. His writing style becomes more amazing and I got hooked on the story before I knew it. Continue the good author!!!
For someone with golden finger he is so pathetic. He need to kill 325 monsters just for leveling to lv 2, and random player react lv 2 just a seconds after server open. The skill system also horrible
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