first of all, this novel has very good grammar, so it's better than half of the stuff on this app. the interactions between characters are really well written and don't feel like a cardboard cutout, only problem is that chapters are kinda short ?
The story je great and I really like it on RR. Si I am juste writing a review to say so.One hundred and fourty characters!!! again, again, again and again.
I thoroughly enjoyed every bit of reading this story. So captivating
i read like 13 chaps imma just review what i got from it so like the mc is a `naive guy it seems like and as you know everyone has a system if u don't like your mc spouting out all his abilities and skills then your not gonna like this one but hey maybe there's gonna be something that's gonna make him change i would prefer him getting beaten or almost dying from getting assassinated from jealousy of his system it would be good maybe he'll start hiding his system and make a fake system and go solo instead of a party not that i mind about joining a party but it would be complicated to hide his system unless he wants to only use that class' skill
Love this so much. After a long time I got to laugh so much deep from my heart. Zhouzhou is hilarious and innocent. Thank you for the hard work authors ?? Does any one have info about its RAW? Please share. Thank you ??
So far, when I read until chapter 7, the story flows naturally, neither too slow nor too fast, so I immensely enjoyed it.There are still some grammatical errors, but they're not too distracting, so I can still leave them alone.I don't know how the main character will develop. Still, after seeing his new life in that fantasy world, for some reason, I feel a terrible feeling that he will start an adventure with a kind and clean heart, of course maybe the author sometimes dirtied it a little with dust, but I'm sure the base is still white, so I think a story with the main character like that is not my taste, of course, this is all just my assumption after reading up to 7 chapters.
It was so good for the first 10-20 chapters then you begin to realize the MC is a complete spineless coward that sits around lazing around talking about how he wants some good life with no worries but it doesn't happen because he continues the running into dangerous situation for every little f****** thing but he's too f****** lazy and stupid to buy anything to make him more powerful so he doesn't have to worry about getting his ass kicked by something as pitiful as a trollAnd then you go to the twilight world radio acts like a f****** guy version of Bella swan being afraid of every little f****** thing oh and don't get me started on the harem it was pretty good in the earlier chapters because you can still hear the names but now there's so many in his harem that is still devolved to him just saying "I'm going out on a date with the girls" instead of individually saying their names because there's like 20 girls already in his harem and he's only been to like five worlds Not to mention the cultivation world's when it's just the author talking down to his readers constantly
Another fantastic story with a great plot and storyline This one has me on the edge of my seat “literally” lol I cant wait foe the nexT part to come out
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A unique cultivation novel and better than most generic ones. Easy to read, not that many grammar errors, and an interesting protagonist to follow is the equation for a good novel. Keep it up, Author LOABA! >3
amazing so far I love the diety type mc who just limits himself but can be what he wants. alot of fun to read. could use a editor for sure but fantastic so far.
Ok I just got to say does anyone else find it ironic that the god of faith betrayed him ummmmufffc.