Author can you please post Nathan/Samuel .. picture on discord ....
Ughh...I can't. I wish this was one of those novels where the chapters are like 1000+... :(
lam add to my library for reading and they very good
Its interesting, for some moba player will think this novel refreshing, and for non moba player they will know why moba is very interesting. Just try 5 chp or more before judge it
A true hidden gem. The novel starts out rough in writing quality, but it gets much better, and continually improves (hold out until about chap 50 if considering dropping). The story is fairly lighthearted, and simple, and most importantly it is fun. The imagination of tye author shines through with many of the system names, and it is a unique take on a concept that hasn't been explored by many that I have seen. Over time I have grown accustomed to MCs in books dealing with severe tragedies that affect their character, but this novel, once you get past the bad writing quality at the beginning is a breath of fresh air. I look forward to seeing this novel reach 500+ chapters, and hopefully author will edit starting chapters with their current writing prowess. Overall, it is not a heavily impactful or emotional novel thus far, but it is charming and in my opinion, very much worth a read. Keep up the good work author, and throw some challenges at MC that he will face alone, like trying to learn some creative monster skills like a flame body skill from a Phoenix or something.
use your for atomic bomb and used it on your enemy
The story? Great so far, the two things that take back, first one is more personal preference, I just don't want the main character to be all edgy past life, where he describes the same edgyness for the (insert chapter number/1.5)th time, it gets repetitive. The second issue is the one that really kills the story for me, that is writing quality. Random brackets ) in sentances, he/she constantly mixed up, names constantly misspelled, skills names changed at random, one text block paragraph Willems with " and then the next one won't start with " but will end with it, because they were actually one whole sentance, both paragraphs, confusing ok but I'll give an example"We should go kill __ because they could really hinder out future plans" But we should be really careful so we don't get caught"It's like the sentence ends, but it just keeps going, and I've noticed this happen a bunch. This book could easily gain an entire star just by having someone with decent English skills go through and edit the basic ****, there's even paragraph comments on each of the problems, it's like a 5-7 hour job bro. The fact that it's not fixed is pure lazyness especially from a novel that went premium, which reduces my experience even more.
Important: To all my readers, especially those who stuck with me since chapter one even though there were so many errors made (lol), I just want to thank you all for reading my story. My goal is to finish this story as it is the first part of a 3 seperate stories I'm planning to write.However, time, money, and reality is telling me that I have to do something else first. I have to do something that will help support myself and my love in writing stories from my head. I hate taking this course of action, and I will definitely miss the characters and some few concepts I made in terms of superpowers and abilities, but I'm going to have to give Alteria a very abrupt end.I'm sorry for not being able to do what I promised and I thank you for understanding why I have to do it. However, my idea of putting the stories in my head into words and share it to all still hasn't changed.If I am allowed to, in the indefinite future, I will write again. The title will change, the characters will have different names, the way the story goes will be changed, but the plot inside my head will remain the same. If that time actually comes, I will be more than glad to have you all read it!Again, thank you all for reading Alteria. That is all for me for now. Farewell!- OwariDa02
I like the author's storytelling style. He is observant enough and the references used can make the reader's imagination wander. Overall good. Spirit! Readers will love your work!
It is good original novel and mc is face smacking and op type with comedy and game elements tag it is another good virtual reality novel thanks for your work!!!!P.S how many chapters will u release in a week .??
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try!https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
I have always been writing fanfiction stories before, but this is the first time I write my own character so I don't know what kind of feels the reader can feel from my character's personality, and personally, I'm not really confident about this story since there is so much better story about reborn/reincarnation here besides mine and my English's kind of sucks. But here's I am proudly present to you my novel of being reborn and revenge.