The story? Great so far, the two things that take back, first one is more personal preference, I just don't want the main character to be all edgy past life, where he describes the same edgyness for the (insert chapter number/1.5)th time, it gets repetitive. The second issue is the one that really kills the story for me, that is writing quality. Random brackets ) in sentances, he/she constantly mixed up, names constantly misspelled, skills names changed at random, one text block paragraph Willems with " and then the next one won't start with " but will end with it, because they were actually one whole sentance, both paragraphs, confusing ok but I'll give an example"We should go kill __ because they could really hinder out future plans" But we should be really careful so we don't get caught"It's like the sentence ends, but it just keeps going, and I've noticed this happen a bunch. This book could easily gain an entire star just by having someone with decent English skills go through and edit the basic ****, there's even paragraph comments on each of the problems, it's like a 5-7 hour job bro. The fact that it's not fixed is pure lazyness especially from a novel that went premium, which reduces my experience even more.