Here's a review. I've read the chapters released, and it's pretty good.Shame about the long break, that dropped the updates down to 4, but since you came back a pretty stable release.The story, characters and writing quality are above average for WN. Take a gander, I am sure you will have a nice evening of reading! Who knows, you might love it and await the daily releases!Fight on Author Zhen!
İ really really love this story bec i am into villain stories with good background stories especially that scene when he tries deal with his bad mouth and his inner thought was great. To be honest i want to see him as furious mode in that way we can have a good villain for sure.and i almost forget misunderstandings omg i really love their false hope about mc haha it reminds me tcf.i hope u can update story soon.Loves from turkey author-sama
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writing quality could use some upgrades, for example the characters names have some typos to them. not only that but the grammars could use some help for example am -> I'm some sentences need to be rewritten again. the story development is good, i can't say more because it'll become spoilers for otherscharacter design is okthe updates hmmmm are not great but not terrible eitherworld background..... this is FGO the world is already complex as it isfyi i wrote this after I've read chap 11ps. Buggy pulled a fast one on me, can't believe he became one of the yonkos
DO NOT READ! After wasting days reading +500 chapters all you will get is an unfinished rushed ending and so many plotholes at the end. Wasted potential the author just decided to stop writing halfway through the story
I like the idea for using a game character in Marvel it cool so please don't forget to put more chapters in the future . The MC better watch out for Hydra or S.h.i.e.l.d. They will go after him in the future to use him as a weapon .
i really enjoy this one and i hope to read more chapter rallye soon. Keep create and we'll keep support this novel.
the main character seem a bit overpowered but it's really cool
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well it seems nice but I couldn't read past the first chapter they say their whole name every time and it something eastern cant tell if its chinese or Japanese but its their whole name every time even in chinese or japanese novels they do nt say the whole name! it makes it imposible for me to read
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The novel isnt bad however I read for crafting and the mc not for side characters so when 2 and a half chapters of side characters come up it is difficult to keep reading even more so with such long chapters. it almost feels like some things are pure filler with no purpose so i wont continue reading this novel