AyanoChibi
Like every MC... It so cringe that only every MCs treats NPCs right..
The premise of the story is really good and the world is pretty intersting, but goddamn is the pace horrible. The story starts really strong and is quite enjoyable if a little bit frustrating, but still acceptable. This goes all down the train around ch. 150-200 and it goes downhill... fast... There happens so much shit that doesnt get resolved and when it gets resolved its pretty fast. If that wouldnt be nough before you can even enjoy the momentary victory of the MC it gets all ruined and something happens or someone appears who is just above MC in every way. So yeah if you want to see a MC who CONSTANTLY has to hide run and train for one to two chapters of victory every 100 chapters this is your story!
It's already been 6 months since I discovered this masterpiece...I want to do it again
What do you mean he’s in the top 700?!?!?! SCANDAL!!!
Im not read
I have only read up until CH 17, but the story is a bit inconsistent, perhaps it will get better as the author finds his path. The reason I say this come from examples such as hundreds of enemies marching towards our protagonist, then he defeats 50, then after it is mentioned he defeated 12 etc. the numbers are inconsistent and fluctuate. Our MC power levels are also weird. We learn in the beginning that he is at silver lvl 28 (close to lvl 29). Then we learn he has some master skill that lets him do more, or less as he chose. Nothing is explained and it seems like the author is more interested in just having the MC do whatever whenever without any consistency or logic behind it. I know that happens in other light novels as well and to some is a core of the story. However the way it is written here it kinda makes things meaningless, because what is the reason behind pages that explain stuff if none of it has any meaning and the MC will do 'whatever' without any rules or regulations behind it. I don't think I will be reading this one to the end.
Wait, this comment section isn't per chapter huh
is this good??
Wow, if all goes well and the ML is not a rapist.... He might be my favourite character. His entrance was enjoyable.
Dawnesque has another novel.. it's the story of Qin Mufeng and Jiang Xun.... I'm so happy
It's getting boring now..And I'm tired as wellToo much plot and the character is ...I don't know what to say anymore.
Same thing here it so annoying
I love the book, the brings us from our everyday life to a world of imagination. And we get to imagine a world outside our reality. I recommend this book
