writing quality, Story development, world background ground are all good
Nice but you can do better. I wish you a good
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Hmmm☺ a nice story that pierce the heart, This is a story that pierces through the heart...Masterful storytelling that resonates deeply.I rate this 5/5 stars, its a true masterpiece."
It's an intriguing story with well writtencharacters. I highly recommend it.
first of all I'm not really into blacksmith novels, your story is okay except for some minor errors and the fact that Pato knows about the system, which is kinda because most system novels only the male leads know about the system. so it's kind of a breath of fresh air. I love it so far keep up the good work.
I love a good vampire romance and this has an amazing start, Lucia loves her books?⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I normally don't go for werewolf based novels, but I decided to give this one a look, and I don't regret a thing! you guys should try it, it's so much different than some other copycat novels.
The plot seems interesting and it would be even better if sight adjustments were made. Overall I believe the story has potential. Although the Mc might need a bit work.
Been reading on my main account for sometime, and I must say, author got an admirer ? Happy valentine. Keep writing, your book is amazing
The book is progressing nice I think. Good luck with it!
The pros:The story is a very pleasant easy read with good writing style. I kept on reading chapters after chapters.The main character is an endearing somewhat impulsive but well intentioned girl. She doesn't act like an all knowing MC, nor does act stupid, it's just right!Also, there are lots of mysteries. Lots of foreshadowing as well that gives the reader a good chance to make a few guess many chapter in advance, some of them will be right! :) Each chapter is very long (like 3 or 4 "standard royal road" chapter, with many different scenes in it), and much action is happening, doesn't feel drawn out, unlike many other stories here on RR and despite chapter size.The cons:There lots of flashback and scene transition that are abrupt and somewhat confusing.Suspension of disbelief. This story will stretch it quite a lot!For example, the story has many unbelievable plot holes, I am not talking about super power and the like, the premise of such story. Instead, for instance, in Oleander - the main city in that story - there are like about 10 to 20 heroes and villains alike and they have been on status quo for quite a while. Neither winning or losing members, despite some super being extremely more powerful than others. The first 3 super fight Hope is in, one side is clearly the winner, but an unexpected lucky twist let the loser escape. Like every single fight. While it might be a staple of superhero stories to have the same actors in many episodes in a row, this is quite hard to believe here.Another example. Heroes do not kill. The story feels strongly about that. Meanwhile the villains are killing like hundreds of civilians per minutes. But that's fine, we can't fault nor terminate them for that hey?