AyanoChibi
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The beginning if the novel was good, but from the start of the meeting with the senior of another era, it has go down form my view. The next thing is that he has not the right behavior of his yung body and the middel old soul. The last think ist the fast cultivation tempo of the boy with the badest spirtroot of the world. (With no extra things for cultivation.)(Logic???)
With an author on hiatus and a novel that seems written by The Plagiarist I can't help but feel dissapointed. Thanks for the eighty chapters.
The story is good just that there are minor mistakes in grammer, but readable. Just dont drop it and continue writing.
love the novel and characters however i feel the translation could be better.Names are somewhat inconsistantly spelled, some words are frequently kept untranslated throughout the novel as well as poor overall translation at times.
Not worth it ..
Okay! I read through the work. It was an amazing job you did there. Just the first and second chapters gripped me harder than I had previously imagined. Nice storyline and satisfying pace. Great one...
This is the wonderful mystery story in QI! I have no idea why the story been rated as 3 stars only. It deserve 4 to 5 stars with no problem at all. The story development is way too interesting and MC is OP enough, but not as a normal MC in xuanhuan or xianxia stories. Also the story has some humor and more modern xuanhuan and xianxia contents are involved after chapter 10.
So far good enough. A big world filled with many characters. For the first few chapters, the story stretches around for a bit and there was a bit of confusion but, the author managed to plug those plotholes so far. The writing quality needs some improvement but overall interesting plot.
I really love this story. This story has it all the romance, fights,scheming and it is not one of those typical reincarnation story. The story is based on a girl actually having the skills to survive (due to her circumstances) and using those skills to reach her goals. It is inspiring as for once it showed that one does not have to die inorder to change their fate or having a random person with op skills to change it for u. You are your own person. Be proud. Dont get me wrong I do like reincartion story and some of them are badass. But this story takes the cake as one of the best original story I have ever read. Luv ya ? keep up the good work hope to read more it more in the future ??❤❤❤
free 5 star review just to ask: Anyone know any good basketball novels that are pretty long and i can binge read in a few days minimum? Preferably ones with good grammar lol. I'd prefer if there was romance/system tag in it as well, there doesn't have to be though.
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