Intresting, a little too fast paste but I’ m curious to see more?
This novel is absolutely amazing Please continue writing
Just from the 3 initial description chapters, I can guess that you have it all planned and prepared.At least most of it!So no worries about it getting dropped right!That's what readers expect most from new original novels.It is very Interesting. I didn't find any small mistakes.Good luck!Keep going!
For a transmigrated story, it has a pretty well built world and has a lot of potential. The descriptions are detailed and right in the beginning. I would suggest that since you are using an already existing character, and especially someone from the olden age, he was too understanding of high technology and that breaks character. So be mindful that he is still fighting with swords when you pulled in out of his world.
It's a really neat and cute story, I I like how you arrange your sentences. It is easy to read in my opinion.I feels that you can try to write more, I'm sure you will be a good writer.
I like this novel, the start was a type of clinch everyone likes! This novel has great potential. i hope it had more chapters! we need more chapters!!
I'm really glad I came across this book the cover is top and the title is ALSO jjang so these two are enough to catch my attention. TBH even though I knew that MC is a guy when I read him talking about his rebirth, I can't help but subconsciously think of him as a girl ??? (I'm so into FL mcs) I should take this chance and read more ML books and urs is a perfect one
Omo! Good plot you got there. It will draw attention for sure. I thought of reading just one chapter to be able to give a review properly but it hooked me so I read the remaining chapters. Good job , update more.
Your book only has a few chapters but after reading them i could tell your story has a lot of potential, the background is great and your writing is good and very simple which makes it quite easy to understand and i cannot wait to see the adventures they go on and i will be looking forward for more updates, hurry and give a chap author, good wrk.
i really like this story..main character is so funny, and so unlucky haha...Keep it going????????????????????????????????????
Let's talk about the milk. Not just the cat named Milk, not just the yogurt in the fridge—though those are delicious touches—but the actual motif of milk running through this entire passage. Zhou Dang 'smokes cigarettes, drinks milk.' The author presents this as a contrast that left Shu Jia 'completely dumbfounded.' Cold, distant pro gamer who loves anything milk-related—fresh milk, yogurt, milk beer, even powdered milk. Fans send him milk gifts. The base cat is named Milk. Shu Jia makes him warm milk powder when he won't take his medicine. Milk is the soft, domestic, almost infantilizing counterpoint to everything his public persona represents. It's not accidental. Milk = comfort. Milk = childhood. Milk = something vulnerable that he wouldn't admit to wanting in any other context. When he tells Shu Jia to make it for him, he's allowing himself to be cared for in the most basic, nurturing way possible. He can't say 'I need you to take care of me,' so he says 'make me milk' and watches her do it. Then there's the yellow paper box. 'Are you a little slow?' On the surface it's a tease. But what is it really? A question wrapped in an insult—the Zhou Dang love language. He can't give her a direct confession, so he gives her a riddle on a tissue box and disappears to Suzhou. The box itself is domestic, disposable, temporary—exactly the kind of thing you'd hide a secret message in. And the thermometer scene—another object of care. He refuses it, then takes it anyway when someone might be watching. The game notification chimes at the worst possible moment, and he closes the interface without hesitation. His career, his games, his entire professional identity—gone in a second because she's there. The screen goes dark and the room goes quiet, and in that silence, everything changes. The recurring imagery here is about visibility and concealment. What Zhou Dang shows the world (the cold gamer, the pro athlete, the male model) versus what he allows Shu Jia to see (the sick guy looking for yogurt, the boy who wants oranges, the person who writes notes on tissue boxes). Milk is the bridge between those two versions of him.
weird novel.the concept is good.the story progression is good.there is too many weird thing , i don't mind theres no logic in novel, everything is fiction anyway. but the way he is behaving and the way he heal others i just cannot stomach it.so yeah i don't really like this novelbut story progression and novel concept actually good.