Okay, this novel is good.Why is that?Warning: Tiny minora spoiler ahead. Read at your own risk.Let me clarify something first in today's novels regarding this genre. Whether they are Japanese, Chinese, or original ones, they have cliches. The repeating happenings that it has becomes predictable and boring. So boring that reading the synopsis or the first chapter will make you lose interest.This one, this novel is a fresh addition because it has new gaming aspects told in a storytelling that will bait people to voluntarily go to the deepest layer of 'the abyss', LOL.Writing Quality:Storytelling factors such as the dialogue and information given in between isn't lacking or excessive. The cliffhanger is really good especially that first chapter. As per the basic requirement every author must learn, "show, not tell
You have very good spooky stories and your grammar is good too so i think it deserves 4 stats from me ?Keep up the good work and I hope u update new chapters soon ???
"Realistic Naruto" huh ?When I read this title, Dream To Immortality(A Naruto Fanfic) came to my mind, it was a really realistic series which involved serious manipulation and mind-rape.I hoped I could have the same feeling here, it just isn't the same.
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The story is good and the steal function is great. Hopefully he won't turn into a degenerate and start stealing pan***s like a certain character. At some points the story extension seemed unnecessary; just to reach a certain word limit. It could be more concise and still be good in those parts.