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Hi! I can't write in english so i'm using google translator sorry if this gets confusing. I'm an avid reader of novels in general, a year ago I started and stopped at the last of your novel and I loved everything about it, the way you showed the world, how the story went with the protagonist's quests, I just want to say that this was all brilliant for me. I read another novel of yours and loved it too. You're the only author who makes me look up your name every month to see if any new chapters of my favorite novel come out? I don't know why it stopped, but I want to tell you that I really enjoyed it from the beginning to the hiatus hahaha, thanks for your work !!!❤️❤️ I think you're a writing genius, your creativity is out of this world.?
Typical Novell about pet shop&cultivating, nothing interesting, the author is a school guy.The plot is boring, there are some love interested , but they are too typical and there is not intrigue.
I am slightly biased but I seriously want to read more of this novel.So, we have this main character(son) who gets into unknown troubles for whatever reason and our real main character(Father) gets a powerful who then saves his son.The plot sounds pretty basic and cliche but how the story is presented should be more important.The story so far is pretty good for me, at least I didn't feel bored yet...it may also be because of me not mas turbating for some time.you know, mas turbation makes us and our brain a bit lazy and not mas turbating keeps us active throughout the day.Anyway, the story is good obviously not some masterpiece level novel but still enjoyable for people that wants to read an MC(Father) that will overpower those powerful ancestors that makes their appearance after an MC(Son) provokes their whole family.
it takes to chapter 9 for you to actually get a plot like where he starts to move and it's not just system notifications and even then it's still not a lot of the story it's very slow and it's kind of annoying I almost describe it as a slow burn for the action because there is none it's his servants talking behind his back and him getting points for it like I don't know how long it takes before he starts to fight back
interesting story and plot background is also nice ????
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The grammar and conversations are unreadable
Author San please continue the Apocalypse one , it was a good one . Please, continue that one and your new novel is good too, Good work , keep it up.
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Granted I only read 5 chapters so my review should be read skeptically. They just did not hook me in. The only big positive I noticed was the grammer was great and I did not see any errors. Which is always a great thing. The negatives for me was the plot is very cliche and overused. In my opinion martial spirit cultivation is my least favorite of the “systems”. And I just did not like how the plot was progressing it seemed very predictable. The book was “cringey” at times. I just did not want to continue reading the book. But who knows, I do think many people could find enjoyment in this book. Maybe even love it, but this book is just not for me.